有奖『翻译练习』（第二十三期）

wind704

Running from south to north, theHuangpu River divide Shanghai into two parts. Pudong is famous as its location in the east of the Huangpu River. In 1920 ~1930's, along with takeing WaiTang as the core finance and the foundation of the trade area, the foreign commerce and nationality capitalist began to extend their economic activities to the Pudong area. But the holdback of the HangPu River enormously influenced Pudong's economical development. The two sides of the river had formed contrast that one side was ten miles of foreign spectacles , the other was the farm lands mainly of nature agriculture plants.
Since 1990, the central government announced to open Pudong , the new zone of PuDong has developed in a fascinating speed. Liking the bamboo shoots after rain, Skyscrapers raised straight from the ground. With the rural scenery and the modern architecture enhancing one another's beauty, PuDong strides into the new century with its new appearance.

miro128

The Huangpu River vertically and horizontally north and south, divide into Shanghai two parts. Pudong because of is located east of the Huangpu River but to acquire fame. This century 20-30's, along with take Bund as the core finance, discuss the trade area establishment, foreign and our country nationality capitalist start the economic activity to extend to the Pudong area. But Huangpu River's being cut off, enormously has affected Pudong's economical development. Pujiang both banks have formed one side are ten thousand business converge tens of thousands of　commencers, at the same time is by the natural crops primarily big piece farmland sharp comparison.
　 The central announcement has opened Pudong since 1990, the Pudong newly developed area construction changes with each new day, progresses by leaps and bounds. The tall buildings like mushroom growth, rises straight from the ground, the rural scenery and the modern architecture enhance one another's beauty, Pudong is striding in the new century by the brand-new appearance.

wsabenzhu

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lr6600

The Huangpu River vertically and horizontally north and south, divided into Shanghai two parts. Pudong acquired fame because of  located east of the Huangpu River . This century 20-30's, along with the Bund as the core finance and  the trade area establish .the Foreign merchant and our nationality capitalist start the economic activity to extend to the Pudong area. But Huangpu River's being cut off, enormously has affected Pudong's economical development. Pujiang both banks have formed one side are ten thousand business converge , at the same time is by the natural crops primarily big piece farmland sharp comparison.
  The central authorities announcement has opened Pudong since 1990, the Pudong newly developed area construction changes with each passing day, advance rapidly. The tall buildings like mushroom growth, rises straight from the ground, the rural scenery and the modern architecture enhance one another's beauty, Pudong is striding in the new century by the brand-new appearance.

wohong

Huangpu River North-South Cooperation, the Shanghai was divided into two parts. Huangpu River in Pudong was named from the east . 20 -- 30 years of this century, as in Waitan at the core financial and business districts established, foreign capitalists and the start of our national economic activity tentacles into Pudong area. But Huangpu River barrier has greatly affected the economic development of Pudong. River side of the strait is a million foreign market traders gather in the 1940s, he was the natural crops on large farms stark contrast.   

     Central Pudong opened since 1990, the Pudong New Area of the changing, fast. Tall are sprouting everywhere, after another, Pastoral scenery and modern architectural style, Pudong is entering the new century with a brand new look.

popeshw

Huangpu River flow from North to South ,which divided Shanghai  into two parts. Pudong's name comed from  it's position that it is on the  east of the Huangpu River  . In the 2or 3 decades of this century, as the core financial and business zone were established  in Waitan , foreign capitalists and our national capitalists began to act at Pudong area. But  It has greatly affected the economic development of Pudong for Huangpu River's barrier.  One side of the River gathering thousands of traders ,the other side was the natural crops,which made a large contrast.  Central declared Pudong's reform since 1990, the New zone of the Pudong is changing quickly. High buildings and large mansions are standed like the  bamboo shoots after a spring rain everywhere,  Pastoral scenery and modern architectural style stand here and there, Pudong is entering the new century with a brand new apperance.

minguo

The Huangpu River flows across Shanghai from north to south and divides the city into two parts. Pudong got its name from its location on the east bank of the River. In the 1920's and the 1930's when the finance and Business trade district with the Bund as its center was established, foreign businessmen and Chinese national capitalists began to extend their economic activities to the Pudong area. However, inconvenient transportation occasioned by river crossing greatly affected the economic development of Pudong. The long stretch of foreign concessions frequented by thousands of merchants on one side of the Huangpu River and the vast patch of natural crops on the other side formed a striking contrast.
Since 1990 when the Central Government announced the opening up and development of Pudong, the Pudong New Area has seen astonishing progress and rapid changes in construction and has achieved outstanding successes in economic development. High-rises have mushroomed, combining idyllic scenery and modern building, which brings a brand-new Pudong into the new century.

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1、4、7 楼都为上品，但也有高质量译文不该有的“硬伤”
1搂。splitting(too harsh a word) ;In 1920-30 (??)
4。修炼语法，即可成正果也
   The Pudong region is named for it locates at the eastern side of the river.
    Many skyscrapers have built since then
7。很可惜，也是极为简单的语法问题：The Huangpu River runs from the north to the south, cuts
Shanghai into two parts.
不当之处，多多包涵！
中学老师

ddl3

Running from north to south, Huangpu river divides Shanghai into two parts. Pudong`s name originates from its lying east to the river. in 20~30s of this century, with the foundation of financial and business area centered at Waitan, foreign enterpreneurs and chinese local capitalists began to introduce business activity to Pudong area. but the obstacle of Huangpu rivier largely effect the economy developmentof Pudong.  a contrast with one side of prosperous area along the river while large area of farm land on the other side was formed.

from the declaration of open of Pudong by govement in 1990, development of Pudong is going faster and faster. lots of  buildings go up, modern constructions fit into the scence of farm. Pu dong is going into the new century with a new appearance.

dickfisch

The Huangpu river flows through from South to North and divides Shanghai into two parts. The Pudong District gets its name from being located on the east side of the Huangpu river. In the 20-30s of this century with the establishment of the trading and financial zone centering about the Bund, the foreign traders and national capitalists stretched their business across to the Pudong District. But isolated by the Huangpu river, the economic development of Pudong was seriously disturbed. On the both side of the Huangpu river two different visions appeared in contrast, a blossoming trade market crowded with thousands Businessmen and a wide field of natural crops.
Since 1990 the central government declared to open the Pudong District, a gread change has taken place there. The high buildings have been growing up one after the other. The modern constructions assort perfectly with the rurality. Pudong is entering the new century with a brand-new appearance.

ypl021

The huangpu river lies in length and breadth from south to north ,and divides ShangHai into two parts .Pudong gains the name only because it locates on the east of huangpu river .In 20-30’s of this century ,with the upbuilding of money markets and commercial districts ,which takes outside beach as hard core, foreign businessmen and chinese national capitalists began to widen economic activity to pudong . But because of huangpu river’s obstruct ,the economic development of pudong was greadtly restricted.As a result , along the huangpu river beach ,one side is a highly developmental area which full of commercial districts ,and the other side is acre which takes agriculture as its emphases .
Since our country proclaims the opening of pudong in 1990, the new pudong’s development begins to change with each passing day . Great buildings like bamboo shoots after a spring rain , build here and there nearly in only one night , rurality and stylish architectures shine upon each other. Pudong is entering into new century with brand-new visage .

埃勾

Huangpu River North-South Cooperation, the Shanghai divided into two parts. Pudong gains the name because of lying to the east of Huangpu River. 20--30 years of this century, as in Waitan at the core financial and business districts established, foreign capitalists and the start of our national economic activity tentacles into Pudong area. But Huangpu River barrier has greatly affected the economic development of Pudong. River side of the strait is a million foreign market traders gather in the 1940s, he was the natural crops on large farms stark contrast.
  Since the central authorities announced open Pudong in 1990, the construction of Pudong New Area changes with each passing day, advances by leaps and bounds . The high buildings and large mansions, like the bamboo shoots after a spring rain, rise sheer from level ground, rural scenery and modern architecture enhance each other's beauty, Pudong is striding into the new century with the brand-new appearance .

金苦瓜

The Huangpu River flows across Shanghai from north to south, divided Shanghai into two parts. Pudong got its name from its location to the east bank of the Huangpu Priver. In the 20’s to the 30’s of this century when the finance and Business trade district with the Bund as its center was established, foreign businessmen and Chinese national capitalists began to extend their economic activities to the Pudong area. But, inconvenient transportation greatly affected the economic development of Pudong. So there formed a striking contrast which thousands of merchants on one side of the Huangpu River and the vast patch of natural crops on the other side.  
  
      However,since 1990 when the Central Government announced that to open and develop Pudong, the Pudong New Area has got progress and rapid changes in construction and has achieved great successes in economic development. High-rises have mushroomed, combining idyllic scenery and modern building, which brings a brand-new Pudong into the new century.

qyj778899

The Huangpu River flows across Shanghai from north to south, dividing the city into two parts. Historically, Pudong got its name from its location on the east bank of the Huangpu Priver. In the 20’s and the 30’s of this century when the finance and Business trade district with the Bund as its center was established, foreign businessmen and Chinese national capitalists began to extend their economic activities to the Pudong area. However, inconvenient transportation occasioned by river crossing greatly affected the economic development of Pudong. The long stretch of foreign concessions frequented by thousands of merchants on one side of the Huangpu River and the vast patch of natural crops on the other side formed a striking contrast.
Since 1990 when the Central Government announced the opening up and development of Pudong, the Pudong New Area has seen astonishing progress and rapid changes in construction and has achieved outstanding successes in economic development. High-rises have mushroomed, combining idyllic scenery and modern building, which brings a brand-new Pudong into the new century.

dujinglun

Huangpu river stretches over south and north, and divides shanghai into two parts. Pudong is well known for being located at the east edge of HuangPu river。In 1920-30’s,as monetary and commercial districts that is in the core of WaiTan was founded, foreign merchant and native capitalist began to expand their economic activity to Pudong territory. But, the blockage by Huangpu river hindered economical growth at a larger extent. There were an obvious contrast beside PuJiang river bank: prosperous scenery in one side and a large farmland with many natural field crops in another side.
Since the central government announced to open pudong in 1990,Pudong New Area changed enormously with each day. High buildings were constructed like mushroom growth , and the field scenery is accompanied with the modern architecture, which enhances mutual beauty. Now, Pudong New Area is striding in new century with a new appearance.

Huang Pu River crossbar from south to north，it divided shanghai into two parts.Pu Dong is named for she lies the east of Huang Pu River.Since 20s of the century,in company with the foundation of finance and trade regional which embayed
Wai Tan,both foreign businessman and our capitalist began to do business in region of Pu Dong .But with the obstruct of Huang Pu River,the development of Pu Dong's economic is greatly impacted.The sides of Huang Pu River formed marked contrast,one side is formed shopping centre,the othe is formed farmland which planted nature crops.
Since 1990 the Center announced Pu Dong is opened to foreigners,the construction of Pu Dong's new developed area change quickly,made great strides.Both high buildings and large mansions as emerge，rurality and modern architecture shined mutually，Pu Dong just with brand-new visage stride into the new century.

cryopig

Shanghai is divided into two parts by the Huangpu river from south to north. Pudong area was named for locating at the east of Huangpu river. As the setting of finance  and the business trade zone, around the bund, the foreigner and our country  capitalist become active in these aero. But the separating of Huangpu river affect the developing of the Pudong aero most.The two shores of Huangpu river is quite different, one side is full of  business and another side only has farm.

Since CCP declare to open Shanghai's Pudong area, the constructions of Pudong area are advancing rapidly. High buildings and large mansions are like bamboo shoots after a spring rain, ruralitys and modern architectures appear alternate, Shanghai's Pudong area is going to the new century with a new appearance.

extra_ks

The Huangpu River crosses vertically and horizontally from north to south, divides Shanghai into two parts. Pudong is famous as it locates in the east of the Huangpu River . In the 20 - 30's, along with the finance and trade area's establishment take outer beach as the core, foreign capitalists and our country's national capitalist start to extend the economic activity to the Pudong area. But Huangpu River barrier has enormously affected Pudong's economical development. Both banks of the Pujiang have formed a sharp comparison, one side is tens of thousands business centers, while the other side is a big piece farmland primarily with natural crops.
since 1990 when the central government announced to open up Pudong, the Pudong newly developed area's construction has changed with each passing day, progressed by leaps and bounds. The tall buildings sprouts everywhere like mushroom after the rain, rises straight from the ground. The rural scenery and the modern architecture enhance one another's beauty; Pudong is striding in the new century by the brand-new appearance.

jiang0317

The Huangpu River,which lies through Shanghai from north to south,divides the city into two parts.Pudong ,a large district in Shanghai,got its name for being located on the eastern side of the river.In 1920s-1930s,as the finance and commercial district with the Bund at the core was built up,foreign investors and national capitalists began to extend their economic activities to Pudong.However the separation of the Huangpu River has greatly influenced its economic  development,and formed a district contrast the two sides of the river,with thousands of commercial buidings on one side and large areas of crops on the other.
  Since 1990 when the Central Committee declared the opening up of Pudong,the construction of Pudong New Area has been making rapid progress every day.High buildings and skyscrapers are shooting up on this land like mushrooms,contrasting with the countryside scenery on the other bank.Now Pudong is entering the new century with a complete fresh look.

refer

The Huangpu River crosses the north and south, divides Shanghai into two parts. Pudong is named because it is located in the east of the Huangpu River. From 1920s to 1930s,foreign and national capitalist begin to extend their economic activities to the Pudong along with the establishment of the financial and trade area around the outer bar. Pudong is broken by Huangpu River and it has great effect on Pudong's economical development. A sharp comparison is formed that one side of the Huangpu River is a ten-mile foreign settlement which thousands of business converges, while the other side is a big farmland with natural crops primarily.
     Since the central government announced Pudong's opening in 1990, the construction of Pudong is changed everyday and great progress is made there. The tall buildings rises straight from the ground like mushroom growth, the rural scenery and the modern architecture enhance beauty from one to another, and  Pudong is striding in the new century with brand-new appearance.