有奖『翻译练习』（第十三期）

wuqiongtian1

Rongyi
Rongyi left Qi kingdom for Lu Kingdom. It happened to be a terrible cold day. When Rong and one of his apprentice reached Lu kingdom, the doors of the city had closed. So they have to spend the open-air night outside the city. It became colder and colder in the night. Rongyi told to his apprentice:"if you give your clothes to me, I will survive and if I give my clothes to you, you can survive, I am an outstanding talented person who manages the nation, and should cherish my life for the sake of the benefit of the people of world, while you ,just an ordinary person, don’t need to stint your life. So bring your clothes to me".His apprentice said:" As a mediocre people, how can I be so generous to give you ,outstanding person, my clothes to wear?” Hearing this, Rongyi signed to say:"Alas, it seems that my assertion will fail". After this, he striped off his clothes to his apprentice to wear. When it came to the midnight, Rong died of cold, while saving his apprentice.
It has not been proven that Rongyi could manage  a nation well, but his idea of being advantageous  to the mankind had reached the highest degree.

royality999

Rong Yi
  Rong Yi left  Qi to Lu. The weather was just very cold. When they reached the gate of the city of Lu it had been closed.He had to stay overnight out of the city with one of the disciples.. At night, it became more and more cold. Rong Yi said to the disciple:if you will give your clothes to me, I should have survive. But I am a  preeminencial man who can govern the country.I must cherry my life for the benefits of all people. You are a so ordinary man that you need not treasue your life,and you should spare your clothes to me." The disciple said:"Just I am an ordinary man,how can I generously give my clothes to your standout 。"Rong Yi signed:"It seems that my representation will not come true!" Then he took off his clothes to the disciple and died in midnight. His death exchanged the disciple's life.
   It has not proved that Rong Yi could govern well in a time.But his idea that profits human beings has reached the maxlmum level!

jane_gj

Rongyi
Rongyi left Qi country to go to Lu country at a terribly cold day. He arrived at the city when the city gate had been closed, so he had to stay at the outside of city without any shelter for all night with one of his follower. In the night, it turned colder and colder. Rongyi said to his follower, “if you give me your clothes, I will live; if I give you my clothes, you will live. I am an excellent person to manage a country, so I cherish my life for the benefit of the world. You are a common person and you needn’t cherish your life. Please give me your clothes. ” The follower said: “I am a common person, so how would I be so generous to give my clothes to you—the excellent person. ” when heard that words, Rongyi signed: “I would never accomplish my opinion. ” then he put off his clothes to his follower. In the middle night, Rongyi died of cold, but saved his follower.
It hasn’t been proofed that Rongyi can manage an era very well; but his opinion of benefiting for human is too sublime to surpass.

yriver

Rung Yi
  Rung Yi leaves Qi to go to the Lu country. Run into weather bitter cold, after the Lu country city gate closure he rushes nearby the city, has to stay  the all night with his disciple outside the city. Night, the weather was more and more cold. Rung Yi said to that disciple that, "You put on clothes to me, I can live , I put on exactly clothes to you, you can exactly live. I am the outstanding talented person which governs the country, but loves for all over the world benefit taking advantage of from already life; You, are an average person, does not need to stint own life, you give yours clothes me." The disciple said that, "I was a mediocre person, how can I generously give you such  outstanding person clothes ?", Rung Yi heard ,sigh said that, "Oh, my suggestion looked like could not realize!" , then takes off the clothes give to the disciple , at the midnight, he had been frozen to death, revived this disciple actually.
  Rung yi could govern a country, that had not  proven; But, his  humanity's thought was achieves the highest degree!

不好翻译，特别是最后一句没有翻译好

RONG YI
RongYi departed for Lu country from Qi country. It was chilly. He didn’t arrive Lu country until the city door was closed, so he had to sleep outdoor with a disciple outside the city. It was cold in the night. RongYi said to the disciple:”If you give me your clothes, I would be alive. If I give you my clothes, you would be alive. I am elite with the ability of administering country, and cherish my life in favor of the people all over the world. You, an ordinary people, shouldn’t stint your life,and should give me your clothes.” The disciple said: ”I am an ordinary people. How can I give you my clothes?” RongYi said with a sigh:” Ai, My opinion appears not to be realized!” Then, He disrobed and gave the clothes to the disciple. In midnight, RongYi was died of cold and the disciple was alive.
   It was not proved that RongYi could administer a country. But his idea of in favor of human was worth high praise.

Rong Yi
Rong Yi left the State of Qi for the State of Lu. When he arrived at the city gate, the door had been tightly shut. Hence he had to spend over night outside the city with his disciple in the open air. Unfortunately it was freezing in the daytime and getting colder and colder at night.
At that moment, Rong Yi turned to his disciple and said, “ if you give me your clothes, I will survive the cold, vice verse.  And I am an elite committed in managing the country, I have to treasure my own life for the benefit of the whole universe, while you are too ordinary to value yourself. Thus please give me your clothes.”
His disciple replied, “ how could it be possible for a man as ordinary as I to be so generous to give my own clothes to a man so outstanding like you?”
At this point, Rong Yi uttered a deep sigh, “ Ach, it is doomed that I can not apply my ideas any more!” After then he took off his clothes and saved his disciple, yet, he, himself was frozen to death at midnight.
Truly, there is yet evidence to prove that Rong Yi was able to well manage the countries at that time, nevertheless, his altruism was unparalleled in the historic record.
初次翻译， 多多指教 ：）

aspirinna

Rongyi leaves Qi for Lu. The weather is very cold, and when they arrive there, the gate of they country has been closed, so Rongyi and one of his disciple have to stay over out of the gate. It grows colder and colder in the night, Rongyi says to his disciple,"if you give me your clothes, I could survive. And  if I give you my clothes, you could survive.However, I am a outstanding man for managing state affairs, so I must love my life for everyone in the world.but you,just a everyman, who needn't  cherish his life. So you give me your clothes!""why  a bourgeois man,me could ungrudgingly give my clothes to you,a outstanding man?"the disciple says. Rongyi signs"alas,It's seem that my opinion couldn't been implemented." THen ,he takes off hisss clothes and gives them to the disciple. In the mid night ,he dies of cold,and saves the disciple.
It tell us, whether Rongyi could manages the affairs  of his age has not been proved. But his thought vailing people has already come to the head which other isn't higher than.

susanly

Yongyi

   Yongyi left Qi and went to Lu. Because of the cold weather, he did not reach to the city side until the gate of Lu was closed, and stay overnight with a disciple outside of the city in the open air. The weather becoming colder and colder on the nigh.Yongyi said to the disciple, “I will survive if giving me your clothes, you will survive if giving you my clothes. I am a talented person in managing country, cherish my life for the profit of people around the world, you are an everyman, there is no need to cherish your life, give me your clothes.” The disciple said, “I am an mediocre man, how could I generously give clothes to an outstanding person like you? Yongyi heard and said, “oh my protestation cannot come ture.” After that, he took off clothes and give it to the disciple. He starved with cold at middle night, but saved the disciple.
   There is no evidence that Yongyi can manage a period well, but he has the thought benefited to human beings which reached to the top degree.

nnnxmmm

Rongyi
Rongyi left Qi to Lu and it was cold.when they came to it,the city gate was closed and they had to stay outside for the night.It was colder and colder,then Rongyi said to the fellow:gave your cloth to me and I would alive,the other way round,gave my cloth to you and you would alive.I'm an extraordinary person and I love my life for the benefit of the world,but you are an ordinary person and you needn't think a lot of your life.give your cloth to me.the fellow said: I'm ordinary,how can I benevolently give it to you the outstanding man? Rongyi listoned it and said:Oh,my opinion can't come true!.when he finished it,he gave his clothes to the fellow.At midnight,Rongyi freezed to death,but he saved the fellow.
Rongyi could fathered his age,it couldn't  be approved,but his wise thought, no one could achieve.

sdyzhou

Rong Yi
Rong Yi left Qi State for Lu State. It was a bitter cold day, and when they got to the Lu State, the city gage had already closed, so Rong Yi and one of his adherents had to stay up the whole night in the open air outside the city. At night, it was getting more and more cold. So Rong Yi said to the adherent, “If you give you clothes to me, I’ll survive; and if I give the closes to you, you’ll survive. I’m the phenom of the country, and for the benefit of the people universally, I have to love my life. You are a layfolk, and you needn’t grudge your life. So, give me your clothes.” The adherent said, “I’m so bourgeois, so how can I give the clothes the standout like you?” Rong Yi heard this and groaned, “Alas, it seems that my claim cannot be realized.” By this, he gave his clothes the adherent. And at the midnight, Rong Yi was dead, and the adherent survived.
We cannot prove that Rong Yi could father the epoch, but his ideology was the highest.

流云小驻

偶也来试一下，虽然我不赞成戎夷的思想：） 想用简洁准确地语言表达不容易啊，继续努力！

戎夷
Rong Yi

戎夷离开齐国到鲁国去。碰上天气酷寒，在鲁国城门关闭后才赶到城边，只好跟他的一个门徒在城外露天过夜。夜晚，天气越来越冷。戎夷便对那个门徒说：“你把衣服给我穿，我就会活下来，我把衣服给你穿，你就会活下来。我是治理国家的杰出人才，为了普天下的利益而爱借自已的生命；你，是一个普通人，不必吝惜自己的生命，你把你的衣服给我吧。”门徒说：“我这平庸的人，又怎能慷慨地把衣服给你这个杰出的人穿呢？”戎夷听了。叹息说：“唉，我的主张看来不能实现了！”说完，便把身上的衣脱下来给门徒穿，到了半夜，自已冻死了，却救活了这个门徒。
Rong Yi left Qi Kingdom for Lu Kingdom. It was just a cold day, he failed to catch the closing time of the city gate of Lu Kingdom. So he had to stay in the open air with his disciple. It was colder and colder. Rong Yi then said to his disciple: “if you give your cloth to me, I will survive; if I give my cloth to you, you will survive. I has the talent to manage a country and must cherish my life for the interest of the world; while, you, just an ordinary person, you don’t need to do so, so why not give your cloth to me?” his disciple answered: “I am just a grass root, then why will I be so generous to give my cloth to you the elite?” Hearing such words, Rong Yi sighed: “alas, it seems that my ambitions won’t be realized!” After the words, he got off his cloth to his disciple. At midnight, he was frozen to die while his disciple was saved.

  说戎夷能够把一个时代治理好，那还没有证明；但是，他那种有利于人类的思想，算是达到不能再高的程度了！
There is no opportunity to prove whether Rong Yi could manage a age well, while his thought of benefiting the world is hard to exceed.

nanyang

Rongyi
Rongyi left Qi kingdom with his prentice to Lu kingdom. It was very cold. When they got to the city of Lu kingdom, the city gate had been closed. They had to stay over in the open air out of the city. In the evening, it got colder and colder. Rongyi said to his prentice, "If you take off your coat and give it to me, I will survive. Oppositely, you will survive. I am a master to manage country, and I have to cherish my life for the benefit of the people. You are a layfolk, and you needn't stint your life. You should offer your cloth to me." His prentice answered, " I am a mediocrity. And how can I be bountiful to give my coat to an elitist like you?" Hearing this, Rongyi suspire and said, "alas, my opinion can’t be realized!" Then he took off his coat and let his prentice wear it. When it gets to midnight, Rongyi froze to death and his prentice survive.

sddz

RongYi
  RongYi left conutry Qi to country Lu,he meet cold weather,he didn't reach the side of country Lu's Wall till
the Wall had closed ,he had to stay outside with his follower.In the night,the weather got more colder.RongYi said to
his follower :"You give your cloth to me,I will stay alive,I give my clothe to you,you will be alive.I am an outstand
man who can deal with country,I cherish my life to contribute to the country;yet you, an ordinary man, you  need  not  
to stint your life,so you give me your dress.”The follower said :”I am a bourgeois person,how can I give my dress
charitably to you?” RongYi heared this. He sighed and said :”Ai, my opinion seemed not to be realized!" after he had said,
he gave his dress to the follower,till the midnight,he was frozen,but his follower was survived.
  It has not proved that RongYi could handle his ages efficiently;but his thought in favor of human had reached great degree
which anyone could get.

戎夷
Rong Yi
  戎夷离开齐国到鲁国去。碰上天气酷寒，在鲁国城门关闭后才赶到城边，只好跟他的一个门徒在城外露天过夜。Rong Yi left County Qi for County Lu. It was extremly cold and he arrived at the  door of the county side but the door had been closed.He had to spend the night outside with his servant.

夜晚，天气越来越冷。戎夷便对那个门徒说：“你把衣服给我穿，我就会活下来，我把衣服给你穿，你就会活下来。 It was becoming colder and colder at night.Rong Yi said to the servant ,"You give me your coat and I can survive and vice versa.
我是治理国家的杰出人才，为了普天下的利益而爱借自已的生命；你，是一个普通人，不必吝惜自己的生命，你把你的衣服给我吧。”I am an outstanding talent for governing my country. So I have to value my life for the sake of my people. But you arre an ordinary person. You needn’t so care for your life. So give me your coat.

门徒说：“我这平庸的人，又怎能慷慨地把衣服给你这个杰出的人穿呢？”戎夷听了。叹息说：“唉，我的主张看来不能实现了！”说完，便把身上的衣脱下来给门徒穿，到了半夜，自已冻死了，却救活了这个门徒。
The servant said,”I am a bourgeois person indeed .How can I give my coat to you such an outstanging figure benevolently? After hearing that ,Rong Yi said sighingly:” My view seens not to be realized!”So he took of his coat and gave it to his servant. At midnight , he froze to death himself but saved his servant .
  说戎夷能够把一个时代治理好，那还没有证明；但是，他那种有利于人类的思想，算是达到不能再高的程度了！We had not proof that Rong Yi could govern his county well. However,his noble thought had reached a peak .

retom

Rong Yi

   Rong Yi left Qi for Lu and encountered a frostiness. Arriving at just outside of Lu’s city after its gate had been closed, he had to pass the night under the stars with his disciple. It was getting colder and colder at night. Then Rong Yi said to the
disciple:”Give your clothes to me, I will survive. if you have mine on, you can keep alive. I am an outstanding person to govern the country. It is for the benefit of the world at large that I try to cherish my life. You, an average person, don’t need to grudge your life, so please give yours to me.” Replied the disciple:”How come such a predictable person like me would generously offer own clothes to such a standout like you?” On hearing that, Rong Yi said with a sigh:”Alas, it seems that my proposition will not be realized!” With these words he took off his clothes to put
them on his disciple. The freezing midnight came and saw Rong Yi’s death before the survival of his disciple.
   It was not yet proved to say Rong Yi can govern an epoch well, but his thought in human’s favor is a summit can’t be surpassed!

zhangye

Rongyi
     Rongyi left Qi country and went to the country of Lu .At this time ，it was very cold ，then he just arrived the outer city wall when the door of the city had been closed ，so he had to stay over beside the city with his prentice. At night ,it was more and more cold , then he said to his prentice that if his prentice took off you coat , and let him wore ,then he could survive ,and vice versa .and said that I was a phenom who can manage the country ，so I must love my life ，but you，a general person who do not have to grudge your life，so gave me your coat please .The prentice said that I was so trite that how would I like to give you my coat？Rongyi heard and sigh：“hey，my proposition will not be realized”.So he put off his coat and his prentice put on .At the middle night ，he went to die and he saved his prentice。
    When we said Rongyi could harness his age，but that could not approve that his ideology which is advantageous to mankind has been arrived the end.

lawer67

Rong Yi

Rong Yi left QI for LU. Unfortunately, it was so cold and the city gate of Lu was closed when he got there. He had to sleep outside overnight with one of his disciple. The weather was getting colder and colder in the night. Then, Rong Yi said to his disciple: “I may survive if you take off your clothes and give it to me, or you survive and I give my clothes to you. I cherish my life because I can contribute to the country, so to the people; however, you, an ordinary guy, why don't you give the clothes to me even though it may cost your life.” The disciple said: “How can you count on an ordinary guy like me to give the clothes generously to you, an super man?” Rong Yi sighed: “Alas, it seems that I won’t see the day that I can realize my ideal!” Then, he took off his clothes and gave it to the disciple. Rong Yi died at the midnight, but he saved the disciple’s life.

There was not evidence proved that Rong Yi would be a great ruler in his era. However, his ideal for the interests of human beings had attained an unreachable high.

冰川

Rong Yi
Rongyi leaves Qi to the Lu country. Gets into the weather which is very cold. but when the Lu country city gate closure, he is only nearby the city. So they have to pass the night in the open-air with his disciple outside the city. Night, the weather is more and more cold. Rong Yi said to that disciple that, "You put on clothes to me, I can exactly down, I put on clothes to you, you can exactly down. I am the outstanding talented person who governs the country, loves borrows from already the life for all over the world benefit; you are an average person, does not need to pity own life, you should give yours clothes to me." The disciple said that, "I am a mediocre person, how also can I generously this outstanding to put on clothes for you?" Rong Yi heard and said that, "Oh, my position looked like could not realize!" Then he takes off the body on clothes puts on to the disciple. To the midnight, he was frozen to death, actually has revived this disciple.
It is said that Rongyi can govern a time, that had not been proven. But, the kind of his advantageous to humanity's thought, was achieves the  degree which cannot be high.

yuwen007

RongYi left Qi for Lu. Becauce of frostiness, they didn’t get to Lu until Lu’s city gate closed, so RongYi and one of his disciples had no choice but to bivouac out of city. In the evening, it became colder and colder, thereupon RongYi said to the disciple, “If you give me your clothing, it will save my life; and if I give you my clothing, it will save your life. I am a elitist on managing state affairs, and I cherish my life for people’s interest. But you are a layfolk, and you need not grudge your life. So please give me your clothing.”  The disciple said, “I am a layfolk and you are a elitist. Why do I give you my clothing bountifully?” Hearing of this, RongYi sighed, “ Alas! My opinions won’t be achieved according to situation.”  Whereafter, he got his clothing off and gave it to the disciple. By midnight, RongYi freezed to death, but his disciple kept alive.
   It is not proved that RongYi could manage an age. But his idea that is propitious to human reaches a top stature.

Rong Yi left State of Qi for State of Lu. It happened to be awfully cold. When he arrived in the city, the gate of the city had already been closed. He had to, with a disciple of his, spend the night in the open outside the city. During the night, it was getting colder and colder, so Rong Yi said to his disciple:

“If you give me your coat, I shall not die of cold; and if I give you my coat, you will not. I, an outstanding talented person who can govern a nation, shall treasure my life in the interests of the people. And you, a street person, can sacrifice yourself. Give me your coat.”

The disciple answered: “How can I, a street person, be so generous as to offer my coat to such an outstanding person as you?”

Hearing this, Rong Yi said with a sigh: "Oh, my viewpoint could not seem to be adopted." With this,he took off his coat and gave it to his disciple. By midnight, Rong Yi died of cold, but his disciple’s life was saved.

There has been no proof that Rong Yi could be a good governor of his time; however, his thought of the interests of mankind was the most noble.