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montana

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学期终于结束，前段日子判卷子真是忙死我了，所以耽误了几天。嘿嘿，相信有的朋友等这期有点等急了吧，那就接招吧 ：）

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原文：

我可能是天津人

   还是从火车上说起吧!大约在我四岁多的时候，我坐过火车。当时带我坐车的人，是我的舅舅，叫张全斌。我记得那时我的打扮挺滑稽的，穿着蓝布大褂、小坎肩，戴瓜皮小帽。那时候，小孩儿打扮成那个样子，够不错了。在我的童年中，也就只有过这么一次。在火车上，因为小，没坐过火车，也很少见过家里以外的人，觉得挺新鲜。也许人在幼年时代终归想要些温暖吧！那时舅舅抱着我，哄着我，我觉得很温暖。一路上吃了半斤炒栗子，睡了一会儿觉，就到了北京。根据这个情况，现在估计起来，我可能是从天津来的。我现在对我原来的父母还有个模期不清的印象，父亲、母亲的形象还能回忆起一点儿，但很模糊。究竟家里姓什么？哪里人?不知道。关于我个人的历史情况，我就知道这一些，再多一点都记不起来了。

montana

至于“蓝布大褂、小坎肩，瓜皮小帽”什么的，您就看着办吧。其他的句子我看还行：）

融融

      The story happened on train.When I was approximately over four years old, I went to someplace with my uncle whose name was Zhang Quanbin by train.I remembered  my appearance was very funny then.I have a blue cloth long unlined gown, a small sleeveless jacket and  a  watermelon rind hat with me .
   
      At that time, the children who dressed up like my appearance were thought  popu-lar.However,there was only once in my childhood. I never went outside by train before that time.And I was too young, I had rarely saw the people outside my family. I was a eye-opener then.Perhaps the human  in  the childhood time need warm  after all.  My uncle hugged and roared me .I felt very warm.  I ate half catty roasted chestnut and took a nap on the way. I arrived in Beijing only in a short time.
   
     According to the situation, I estimated  that I came from Tianjin possibly.I now also have the mold time unclear impression to my original parents. My father and mother's images also can be recollected little,  but  is very fuzzy.  What  is  my  family  surname actually? Where did we come from?I do not know. My historical situation that I know is  more than I could record again.


         一些句子不会翻译， ，先交个作业吧。

hyde2457

我可能是天津人
  还是从火车上说起吧!大约在我四岁多的时候，我坐过火车。当时带我坐车的人，是我的舅舅，叫张全斌。我记得那时我的打扮挺滑稽的，穿着蓝布大褂、小坎肩，戴瓜皮小帽。那时候，小孩儿打扮成那个样子，够不错了。在我的童年中，也就只有过这么一次。在火车上，因为小，没坐过火车，也很少见过家里以外的人，觉得挺新鲜。也许人在幼年时代终归想要些温暖吧！那时舅舅抱着我，哄着我，我觉得很温暖。一路上吃了半斤炒栗子，睡了一会儿觉，就到了北京。根据这个情况，现在估计起来，我可能是从天津来的。我现在对我原来的父母还有个模期不清的印象，父亲、母亲的形象还能回忆起一点儿，但很模糊。究竟家里姓什么？哪里人?不知道。关于我个人的历史情况，我就知道这一些，再多一点都记不起来了。
Maybe I am a Tientsinese
Well, as for my birth, the trip on the train should be spoken of . I took the train when I was four with my uncle. His name is Zhang Quanbing. I still remember my costumes were so funny, a blue coat, a little shawl, a cap. At that time, the children were all dressed like mine, it was popular. In my childhood, I remember it was the only opportunity I was dressed like that. It was the first time I took the train and made no acquaintance to the outsiders before that. On the train, I felt everything was new to me. Perhaps, I say, we are hungry for affection in the childhood. I felt so warmth in my uncle’s caress and appeasement. On the way, I ate up half a jin of fried chestnuts, slept for a while, when I wake up, I found myself in Peking. So, judging from the trip, I was born in Tientsin.Now, my foreparents leave a dim impression in my mind, something about my born parents are still in my memory but very dim.What my family name was and where I was born is still unknown. About my personal experience, I only recall so much, nothing more.
个人感觉这段回忆录，应多采用口语体处理，句式要短，语言要简洁；再加文中交待的年代缘故，语言上要力求使用较老的英语方式来表现。可惜，这两点，本人都没有做到，遗憾呀。

montana

“个人感觉这段老舍回忆录”，非也非也。节选于候宝林的回忆录《一户侯说》。有兴趣的可以去下面网址看看。
http://gobook.cn/read/read22.asp

hyde2457

哎呀，我改，我改，出丑了，555555555

流云小驻

我也来参与啊

我可能是天津人
Maybe I Am a Tianjin Native

  还是从火车上说起吧!大约在我四岁多的时候，我坐过火车。当时带我坐车的人，是我的舅舅，叫张全斌。我记得那时我的打扮挺滑稽的，穿着蓝布大褂、小坎肩，戴瓜皮小帽。那时候，小孩儿打扮成那个样子，够不错了。在我的童年中，也就只有过这么一次。在火车上，因为小，没坐过火车，也很少见过家里以外的人，觉得挺新鲜。也许人在幼年时代终归想要些温暖吧！那时舅舅抱着我，哄着我，我觉得很温暖。一路上吃了半斤炒栗子，睡了一会儿觉，就到了北京。根据这个情况，现在估计起来，我可能是从天津来的。我现在对我原来的父母还有个模期不清的印象，父亲、母亲的形象还能回忆起一点儿，但很模糊。究竟里姓什么？哪里人?不知道。关于我个人的历史情况，我就知道这一些，再多一点都记不起来了。
It is better to start my story from a train. I took it in my four-year old with my uncle called Zhang Quanbin. I still remembered my funny dressing, blue gown, small sleeveless jacket and a Chinese cap. That was good enough for a child at that time. It was the only opportunity for me to dress in such a way in my childhood. I was so young, had never taken a train before and seldom met people except for my family members, everything seemed fresh to me in the train. Maybe a child needs more warmness! I felt very warm when my uncle held me in his arms and soothed me. I ate 250g of fried chestnuts in the journey and snapped to Beijing. According to these clues, I guess I came from Tianjin. I still keep an unclear image with my original parents, little and fuzzy. What on earth were they called? Where did they come? I don’t know. About my personal history, the above is all, nothing more remembered.

newbeing

我也现个丑，翻译一下
Maybe I am from Tianjin
Let's begin talking from train.When I was  about four years old,I once took train .It was my uncle,ZhangQuanbin,who took me in the train.I can remember that I looked funny that time,in blue gown,little jacket,tiny cap.At that time,children wore like that would be good.In my childhood,I can  remember only that time I wore like that.On the train, I was curious because I was little , had never taken train and had seldom met others except my familys. Maybe people always want to be warm when they are young.When my uncle hugged me and coaxed me ,I felt warm very much. I ate some fry chestnut,slept for a while then I was in Beijing.From all of these, I guess I am from Tianjin. I  still can remember something about my
parents,but it is blurry. Where am I from? What is my family name ? I don't know. That is all my know about myself, I can't remember anymore.

rocry

I may be from Tianjin

Let's talk about it from train.Probably I had not taken the train until I was over four years old. The person, who took me to the train at that very moment was my uncle,called Zhang Quanbin.I remember my dressing was very funny at that time,worn a Chinese-style gown of blue cloth,a small sleeveless jacket, wear the small cap of melon peel. At that time,if one child dressed up into that sample, it was good enough.But during my childhood, there is only such once .It was very fresh for me to be in the train for being young and having never been in a train and having not seen the people except my family members. Perhaps people want some warmth after all at childhood age.The uncle had me in arms at that time, and coaxed me, I felt very warm. Only have eaten half a jin fried chestnuts on the way and taken a snap,Beijing is just before eyes.According to this situation, estimate now, I may be come from Tianjin.I have a mould and an unclear impression on my original parents now, the images of parents still can remember a little , but very fuzzy.I wonder what my family's surname is and where i am from. I did not remember any more about my personal history,just the words above.
晕`高中刚毕业``英语没学好啊！还得加油！只能改成这样子了 水平太有限了```继续努力学习ing!!


翻译的不好``呵呵 `将就着交吧``

billdon

I may be a Tianjinese

Allow me to talk from the train. When I was four, I had the chance to take the train. It was my uncle, Zhang Qianbin, who took me to take the train. I remembered my dress was very funny. I wore a big blue gown, a small vest coat and a skullcap. It was not bad for a child to be dressed like that at that time. Only for once in my childhood was I dressed like that. As I was very young, never took the train and saw some many guys outside home, I felt everything fresh and interesting. Maybe man in the childhood was always in need of the sense of warmth. When Uncle hugged and hushed me to sleep, I felt very warm. We arrived in Beijing after I ate 250 grams of roast chestnuts and had a snap. To conclude from the above fact, I think I may come from Tianjin. Until now I still have indistinct memory of my former parents. I can recall my mother's appearance, but very vaguely. What's my family name? Where do I come from? About my history, these are all what I know. I can’t remember anymore.

I probably is a man from Tianjin
Nevertheless talking through the train ! About being living me four years old time much , I have take a seat the train .
Bring my man by bus at that time , and was my uncle , and greets Zhang Quan Bin .
I remembers then I the make-up is rather amusing , apparel blue cloth unlined long gown and little sleeveless jacket are wear the melon skin small cap .
Then , child makes up into that shape , and is pretty good .
Is living I childhood in , has  also have only such once .
Being living on the train , for little , not takeeing a seat the train , man outside also seldom having catch sight of in the home feels rather fresh .
Maybe the infancy that man is living age to desire somely in the end warm !
Then the uncle is holing or carry in the arms me , he humbuging me , I feels and warm very much .
Take all the journey semi jin sauties the chestnut , sleep in an instant , and  reachd Beijing .
, appraise that I  probably come through Tianjin on the basis of this situation now .
I to my former parents  still possess now standard stage the  unclear impression , the dad and form of mother still be able to recall a bit , yet obscure very much .
Really in the home family name what ?
Where man ? Not have no idea of .
On the history situation of my individual , I  realize this some , and far more to some extent wholly can not to bear in mind again.

tycoon

又来了
我可能是天津人
I may be from Tianjin
  还是从火车上说起吧!大约在我四岁多的时候，我坐过火车。当时带我坐车的人，是我的舅舅，叫张全斌。我记
The beginning of my story was a train ride. At the age of about four years old my uncle named Zhang Quanbin brought me to take train. I still remembered I was ridiculously dressed in blue shirt and wore a mini leather cap.  He must look good ifA child was dressed that way at that times. This was the first and only time for such dressing in my childhood.
得那时我的打扮挺滑稽的，穿着蓝布大褂、小坎肩，戴瓜皮小帽。那时候，小孩儿打扮成那个样子，够不错了。在我的童年中，也就只有过这么一次。在火车上，因为小，没坐过火车，也很少见过家里以外的人，觉得挺新鲜。也
On the train I felt very curious because I had never taken the train before and seldom seen people except my families. Maybe a child at a little age must be in need of some caring and warmth. I felt very warm in my uncle's arms. On the way I ate half-jin fried Chinese chesnut.
许人在幼年时代终归想要些温暖吧！那时舅舅抱着我，哄着我，我觉得很温暖。一路上吃了半斤炒栗子，睡了一会儿觉，就到了北京。根据这个情况，现在估计起来，我可能是从天津来的。我现在对我原来的父母还有个模期不清的印象，父亲、母亲的形象还能回忆起一点儿，但很模糊。究竟家里姓什么？哪里人?不知道。关于我个人的历史情况，我就知道这一些，再多一点都记不起来了。
I slept for a while and arrived in Beijing. Judging from these I felt I may come from Tianjing. I now had an vague impression of my parents and could recall a little about them, but very dimly. So I did not exactly know my family name and origin. I knew so much about my family background and couldn't recall any more.

jane_gj

I maybe came from TianJin.
Let’s begin from the trip by train. When I was about 4 years old, I had trip by train. The one who took me to the train was my uncle, called Zhang Quanbin. I still remember my funny dress at that time—worn in a long gown made of blue coarse cloth, a small waistcoat and a small skullcap. But in that period, all the family cannot afford to dress their child in that way.  In my childhood, it was the only one. Because I was so young, I had never taken train and seldom seen strangers beyond my families.  I feel exciting on train. Maybe all the people in their childhood want the warm care of other person. My uncle hold me in his arm, eased me and made me feel warm. In that trip, I ate quarter a kilogram fried chestnut, slept for a moment, and then arrived at BeiJing. According to that situation, I guessed I came from TianJin. I still have a vague impression for my original parents. The figures of father and mother can be remembered a little, but they are unclear. What on earth was the family name? Where did I come? I cannot remember. I only know these history of my personal life, and cannot remember even a little more.

Perhaps I am from Tianjing Province.Let me begin from the train I ever stayed.About 4-year-old,I ever had a trip by train.At that time the person who took me to get on the train is my uncle,whose name is Zhangquanbing.I remembered that my appearance at that time was funny.I was wearing a blue coarth cloth,a little waistcoat and a skullcap.At that period,it's good appearance for a kid and in my childhood I only once appeared like that.When I was in the train because of my young age and I never got on a train before in addition of I seldom see someone outside my family,I felt everything is fresh.Maybe everyone wants warmth when he was young.I felt warm because my uncle was nestling me and easing me.During the trip to Beijing,I have eaten a half kilogram fried chestnut and been slept for a while.so from these,I think maybe I'm from Tianjing.Now the impression on my parents is not clear,but their appearancewhich is also unclear.What's my family name?What's my root?I'v no idea.What's I know about myself just is that above,and I can't remember more .

lindaking2

I may come from Tianjing.
Firstly, let’s begin from the train. I possibly travelled by train when I was 4 years old. The man who I followed is my uncle called Zhang Quanbin. I remembered I was dressed quite funny then by a blue Chinese-style unlined jacket, a little waistcoat and a melon-like cap. But it was good enough for children at that time. And it’s the only chance in my childhood to travel by train. As I was young and had never traveled by train before, even seldom saw people except my family, it’s quite interesting to me. Maybe everyone needs warmth eventually in his childhood. And I feel warm as my uncle carried me in his arm when he comforted me. On the way, I ate up half a unit of fried chestnut and slept for a while, and then found myself arrived at Beijing. Because of these memories, now I estimated I possibly came from Tianjing.I now still keep a unclear image of my parents, a little memory of their image but quite vague. What’s my family name? Where do they come from? I don’t know. These are all my history I can remember now, not even a little more I can thought of.

rick289

maybe I was born in Tianjin. Let’s begin with the tirp by  train.

When I was around 4 years old, I had trip by train. The one who took me to the train was my uncle, called Zhang Quanbin. I still remember my funny dress at that time—worn in a long gown made of blue coarse cloth, a small waistcoat and a small skullcap. At that time,it’s nice to be dressed like that.To my childhood,it was only once for that.I felt very exciting,for Iwas young,and I never saw strangers outside my families.Maybe people need warm welcome from others in their childhood.My uncle hold me in the arm,eased me and made me feel warm.During the trip,I ate 250g fried chestnut,slept for a short time,and then I arrived in Beijing . According to that situation, I believe that I came from TianJin. I still have a vague impression for my parents.The impression for my father and mother is a little and unclear.
What on earth was the family name? Where did I come? I cannot remember.I only know these history of my personal life,and  I can’t remember any more.
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怎么没反应???????

yriver

Probably I am a tianjinese
let's start with the trip by train.when I am 4 years old,I had a trip by train , The person took me was my uncle ,named Zhang quanbin.I remenber my dressing was very funny at that time--worn gown of blue cloth ,small sleevless jacket,wear a small cap of melon peel. At that time,a child dressing like me is good enough.During my childhood,it was the only one.Because I was young, I had never taken train and seldom seen strangers beyond my families. Perhaps everyone at childhood want some warmth ,My uncle had me in his arms,coaxing me ,I felt very warm .During the trip ,I had a half kilogram fried chestnut,and took a snap then arrived in Beijing .According to this situation,I may come from Tianjin.I have a unclear impression on my parents.The impression on my father and mother cound been remembered a little but unclear.What was my family name? Where did I come from? I don't know.I only know above history of mine,and I can't remember any more.

rick289

对不起，威望设错了，重新发一遍
maybe I was born in Tianjin. Let’s begin with the tirp by train.

When I was around 4 years old, I had trip by train. The one who took me to the train was my uncle, called Zhang Quanbin. I still remember my funny dress at that time—worn in a long gown made of blue coarse cloth, a small waistcoat and a small skullcap. At that time,it’s nice to be dressed like that.To my childhood,it was only once for that.I felt very exciting,for Iwas young,and I never saw strangers outside my families.Maybe people need warm welcome from others in their childhood.My uncle hold me in the arm,eased me and made me feel warm.During the trip,I ate 250g fried chestnut,slept for a short time,and then I arrived in Beijing . According to that situation, I believe that I came from TianJin. I still have a vague impression for my parents.The impression for my father and mother is a little and unclear.
What on earth was the family name? Where did I come? I cannot remember.I only know these history of my personal life,and I can’t remember any more.

mirror79

May be I came from TianJing
Just talk about it from train!
I came here by train when I was over 4, companied by my mother's brother named Zhang Quanbing. I remembered I dressed up very funny, a blue big suit, little shawl and a little skullcap. But at that time a boy dressed up like this is very well . At my childhood, I just dressed up like this for one time. I am very curiosity in the train because it was my first time by train and I rarely saw foreigns except families. May be a boy eventually needs warmth! My nuncle held me and made me laugh which make me feel warmth. I ate a quarter of kilogramme fry chestnut and sleep a while before we arrived BeiJing. I may be come from TianJing estimate from it now. I have blurry impression about my primary parents. The visual of my father and mother can be remembered a little, but very blurry. But what's the surname of my family, and where we come from I cannot remember. This is my personal history. I just know this, I can't remember any more.