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[[求助与讨论]] Achievements and Failures of Wuhan University

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发表于 2005-2-28 20:31:17 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
  [/ It is exciting to know that Wuhan university attracted the most people to enroll for the graduate entrance examination in China this year. Needless to say, Wuhan University has its special characteristics, as well as its special achievements contributing to its great fame.
Its fame, first of all, is relying on its open classes. Here, arts, history and philosophy never separate from each other, and the students form science may also attend the classes of arts. Thus students may learn more to advance their all-round qualities. The fair, just and open competition contributes as another great achievement. For instance, the timely and open mark-report of the graduate entrance examination exemplifies this well. Its recruitment and employment policies also become its sparkling points. The active and positive consulting services and the encouragement for business creation ensure its high recruitment and employment rates.
No matter how great it is, there also exist some points in need of perfection. The academic sib-propagation confirms as one of its failure. On one hand, excellent students outside may chuck away from the opportunities to enter a good university; on the other hand, Wuhan university may lose the chance to welcome more excellent students. Public English education also needs some more improvement. For instance, the teachers shall pay much more attention to the speaking & listening capabilities of their students. The tight commercial environment comes as another obstacle for its long-term development. Why not create much freer academic atmosphere for the teachers to stay stable in the labs or classrooms to research or teach? In addition, the affording capability of the students also needs to be taken into account.
Actually, the construction and development of a first rank university rest on the effort of you, of me, and of all the people. I believe that if we all go hand in hand, Wuhan university will enjoy a much more prosperous and brighter future.
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发表于 2005-2-28 21:43:51 | 显示全部楼层
好,不愧是Wuhan University的高材生,很地道的英语!
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 楼主| 发表于 2005-2-28 22:27:10 | 显示全部楼层
感谢版主美言,初来乍到,请多指教!
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发表于 2005-3-5 09:58:04 | 显示全部楼层
Welcome 半分 to the English Board to talk about your beautiful university and communicate your personal opinions with all of us. This isactually a very good composition, at the same time, the following points are my own understanding which needs to exchange ideas with you

In my personal opinion,  if "attracted" is changed into its present tense "attracts", it will be much better, which proves that this kind of thing is still happening

"Thus students may learn more to advance their all-round qualities", we seldom use "advance one's ability", perhaps "develop" will be more proper

"...and the students form science may also attend the classes of arts",  is "from"  wrongly written into "form"?
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 楼主| 发表于 2005-3-5 17:14:48 | 显示全部楼层
版主不愧是版主,很好的建议,谢谢!
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