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[[求助与讨论]] Do these two sentences flow?

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发表于 2008-1-20 15:28:01 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
This is for a wedding invitation:

We have experienced love...in our parents, our families and friends and now a new love in each other

Deborah and Antonio invite you to share with us a celebration of love...

Do these two sentences flow?? Especially with the use of \"We\" and \"us.\"
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