“演讲”类作文的写作技巧

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　“演讲”类作文是交流思想､表达见解或介绍学习､工作情况和经验的文章｡这类文章通常由开头､主体､结尾三个部分组成｡开头部分要开门见山,提示主题,引人入胜｡主体部分要环环相扣,层层深入｡结尾部分要简洁有力,余音绕梁｡在行文的过程中,要处理好层次关系和语意的衔接等问题｡
　　
　　【例题展示】
　　假若你班将举行一次英语班会,主题为“中学生应该如何使用零花钱”｡请你根据以下提示,以班长的身份写一篇发言稿｡
　　
　　使用方式 好处
　　存入银行 养成节约的习惯
　　购买书籍 获取知识
　　其他 培养兴趣(音乐､体育､集邮)
　　注意: 1. 词数:120个左右; 2. 参考词汇:零花钱pocket money
　　
　　【思路点拨】
　　一､ 仔细审题,明确文章应包括的内容和写作要求:
　　1. 以“中学生应该如何使用零花钱”为主题｡
　　2. 零花钱的正确使用方式以及相应的好处｡
　　3. 以班长的身份写一篇发言稿｡
　　二､ 确定文章结构:
　　1. 开门见山,提示主题｡
　　2. 重点表达表格内所提示的信息,即:零花钱的三个去向和相应的好处｡
　　3. 希望大家畅所欲言｡
　　三､ 确定时态与人称:
　　1. 人称:短文应以第一人称来写｡
　　2. 时态:整体可用一般现在时,但在表达零花钱的3种使用方式的好处时,也可使用将来时｡
　　
　　【写作步骤】
　　一､ 列出文章可能涉及的词汇:
　　1. deal with2. do ... with ...3. get pocket money from 4. our parents5. spend6. use up7. spend ... on sth8. keep money in the bank9. form the habit of10. saving11. gain a lot of12. knowledge
　　13. music, sports,stamp-collecting14. develop15. the interests
　　16. books and magazines
　　二､ 用英语列出文章要表达的要点:
　　1. How should we middle school students use our pocket money in a right way?
　　2. Our parents often give us pocket money.
　　3. We keep some pocket money in the bank.
　　4. We form the habit of saving.
　　5. We may buy some useful books and magazines with some pocket money.
　　6. We get/gain a lot of knowledge from books and magazines.
　　7. We develop the interests in music, sports or stamp-collecting with some pocket money.
　　三､ 增加信息,扩展句子:
　　1. Today I’d like to talk about how we middle school students use our pocket money.
　　2. We can easily get pocket money from our parents.
　　3. We keep some pocket money in the bank so that we can form the habit of saving.
　　4. We may buy some useful books and magazines with some pocket money and then we can get/gain a lot of knowledge.
　　5. If we love music, sports or stamp-collecting, we can use some of our pecket money to develop the interests in them.
　　
　　【佳作登场】
　　Dear friends,
　　I’m very glad to have the opportunity to speak to so many of my classmates here. Today I’d like to talk about how we middle school students spend our pocket money in a right way. As is known to all, we can easily get pocket money from our parents. But it is no good for us to spend all of it on food. In my opinion, firstly, we may spend some of the money on books and magazines, from which we can gain a lot of knowledge and pleasure. Secondly, if we love music, sports or stamp-collecting, we can use some of our pecket money to develop the interests in them. Thirdly, of course, we may also keep some in the bank, which will help us form the habit of saving. Do you think so ? I really hope you will give me your opinion about it.
　　That’s all. Thank you.
　　
　　【练练看】
　　你校将举行一次以“My Future”为主题的英语演讲会｡假如你被推选去参加演讲,请你按照下面的提纲写一篇演讲稿｡(词数120个左右)
　　(1) 我决定当一名中学教师｡当教师是我孩提时代的梦想｡
　　(2) 我认为,和孩子们打交道,并不是浪费时间,而是很幸福的｡
　　(3) 我国缺少教师｡我们中间想当教师的人不多,主要原因是当教师工作艰苦,收入不高｡可我决心献身于教育事业｡
　　参考范文:
　　My Future
　　My fellow classmates,
　　Every one of us is thinking about the future. What is my thought? I have decided to become a middle school teacher. Does it sound surprising? I had this dream when I was a child. I love children. I don’t think it a waste of time to be with them all years round. On the contrary, it is a pleasant thing for me to be with the children. It will give me happiness. As we all know, teachers are badly needed in our country, but not many of us want to be teachers. One of the main reasons for this is that teachers work too hard but get too little. In spite of that, I’m determined to devote all my life to the cause of education.