帮忙看下这句话是否正确？

horky

I think it is convenient to travel somewhere like Mars, Saturn and so on. Do you imagine that our cities under the sea? It is strange to think, but it will be true in the future.帮忙看哈是否正确，建议改哈

白马西北驰

引用第0楼horky于2007-12-18 13:28发表的 帮忙看下这句话是否正确？ :
I think it is convenient to travel somewhere like Mars, Saturn and so on. Do you imagine that our cities under the sea? It is strange to think, but it will be true in the future.帮忙看哈是否正确，建议改哈

somewhere: 按你的句法，是做名词，那么travel的用法就错了；
imagine 后面接了从句，可是又没有谓语；
it是形式主语，代表“to think”，又在复合句的第二部分做主语，而第二个it指的是“星际旅行、海底城市”这些想象中的事实，逻辑混乱了。

改成这样：

I think it will be convenient to travel to planets like Mars, Saturn and so on. Can you imagine cities under the sea? This is strange to be conceived, but will become true in the future.

请大家指教。

horky

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