Any errors in the paragraph?

jk1688

Can you find any errors in the following paragraph?
I’m a civil servant. Everybody around me envies me and always says that you
have a stable and well-paid job, but I really don’t like it. Since I practiced
yoga, I have deeply liked the exercise. So I want to leave the job and commit
myself to practice yoga. But I can’t make up my mind to do it because of the
pressure from my family and friends. Now I am distracted by the desire and the
pressure. What should I do?

petersheng

I’m a civil servant. Everybody around me envies me and always says that Ihave a stable and well-paid job, but I really don’t like it. Since I practiced
it , I have been deeply in love with yoga . So I want to quit my job and commit
myself to (practicing )yoga. But I can’t make up my mind because of the
pressures from my family and friends. Now I am confused by my decision and the outside pressures. What should I do?