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发表于 2007-5-23 16:29:10 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
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发表于 2007-5-23 17:34:33 | 显示全部楼层
真是隔行如隔山,本来想提点意见什么的,然而别说英文,就是中文都读得我一团迷雾。

楼主译文中“The first part inspects......The second part analyze......The third part analyzes......“似乎都是汉语句式。英语中常用”In the first part of the study, 被动语句或主动语句......In the second part of the study, 被动语句或主动语句, In the third part of the study, 被动语句或主动语句"

不过我这English水平,说实在的,真的好笑得似乎也有点可爱了。仅借此学习,不当之处,请批评指正。还是听专家们的意见,或给喜欢做点学问的老外瞄瞄。

楼主论文摘要层次分明,应该是篇好文章,发了再贴上来,我也可借机学点世界历史。
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发表于 2007-5-23 17:41:52 | 显示全部楼层
弄了个范例,请楼主看看,或许有点帮助。
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发表于 2007-5-23 17:54:29 | 显示全部楼层
we aims at revealing the competing relationship in Northeast Asia between America and Japan
aim at 多了个s
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 楼主| 发表于 2007-5-23 18:47:29 | 显示全部楼层
谢谢楼上的,的确多了个s,呵呵
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 楼主| 发表于 2007-5-23 18:55:02 | 显示全部楼层
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发表于 2007-5-23 19:16:32 | 显示全部楼层
中文内容提要
《鲁特——高平协定》和《蓝辛——石井协定》是美日之间于二十世纪初在中国东北争夺利益而又相互妥协的产物,两个协定的签订过程体现 出了这一时期的美日关系。本文通过对两个协定的比较研究,一则刻画美日两国在东北亚的争夺态势,并做深层剖析;二则揭示美日争夺对相关国家及东北亚国际格局变迁的影响。

Abstract
Root- Takahira Agreement and Lansing-Ishii Agreement are the result of thecompetition and compromise between America and Japan, which happened inNortheast China in early 20th century. The signing of the two agreementsreveals the US-Japan relations in this period. Through comparative research onthe two agreements, on the one hand, we aims at revealing the competingrelationship in Northeast Asia between America and Japan, and then do anin-depth analysis; on the other hand, pointing out the influence on relevantcountries and the Northeast Asia international relations.


My translation:

Two agreements, Root-Takahira Agreement and Lansing-Ishii Agreement, are the compromising results of U.S. and Japan competing for their respective national interests in Northeast China during early 20th century. And the negotiation processes of those two agreements also reveal the US-Japan relationships of this period. The competition dynamics of U.S. and Japan over the Northeast Asia, and its effects on the changing patterns of international relations in the Northeast Asia will be described and analyzed in this thesis by comparative method.

就教于高手、方家。




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发表于 2007-5-24 07:13:31 | 显示全部楼层
引用第0楼drunkants于2007-05-23 16:29发表的 论文内容提要(中英文,请大家提意见) :
论文共分三个部分。
第一部分详细考察《罗脱——高平协定》与《蓝辛——石井协定》的签订过程,立论角度选取美国为主动方,以美国三个总统执政期所采取的不同的东北亚政策为出发点,刻画西奥多•罗斯福的“联俄制日”、威廉•塔夫脱的“金元外交”及伍德罗•威尔逊的理想主义外交原则在东北亚的具体体现,并分析这一期间美日的东北亚争夺。同时,笔者还对两个协定进行比较,指明其内在关联性及差异性。
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个人意见,无足挂齿,海涵。
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