[原创空间]Obituary

Miss Lily was born in 1971 at her hometown Anqiu city in Shandong Province. She died in 2087 in Jinan. Before her dead, she lived in Jinan for almost all of her time.  She was survived by her husband and her daughter.
When she was a little girl, she was very clever and she studied hard enough to pass the entering examination of University. She gained her master’s degree in Medical College of Qingdao University in 1998. And her doctor’s degree was obtained from Medical College of Shandong University.
She married her husband who was her first lover in 1998 just when she graduated from Qingdao University. They loved each other so much that they always thought for the other. Therefore, they had a very pleasure life.
She gave birth to her daughter when she was 35 years old, thus, she loved her just as her own heart. But, she was very strict to the daughter’s study and work. As a result, the daughter has become a famous professor in the field of immunology.
As we all known that, Miss Lily was a prominent professor in cancer immunology. She prompted the development of the gene therapy of breast cancer.
In generally, Miss Lily was an integrity, respectable and successful immunologist, wife and mother. We will never forget her.

It is interesting to write an obituary for yourself when you are still alive.

myfmyf

  "Before her dead," should be "before her death".
"entering examination of University", in this sentence, we usually use "enterance examination"

Is it better to use "a very happy or pleasant life" instead of "a very pleasure life"
We usually use " be strict with sb" and "be strict in sth".
"In generally", should be written into "in general"
All of these above are all my personal opinions

Thank  cola for writing such an interesting article and at the same time sharing it with us WELCOME,^_^    

下面是引用myfmyf于2004-10-27 5:03 PM发表的 :
  "Before her dead," should be "before her death".
"entering examination of University", in this sentence, we usually use "enterance examination"

Is it better to use "a very happy or pleasant life" instead of "a very pleasure life"
We usually use " be strict with sb" and "be strict in sth".
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Thank you very much! You are right. I should have examed it before sharing.

I am gald to meet you!

How old You will!Do you think the cancer immunology can prolong mankind's life?

Just a hope!  I think people's lives will be prolonged with the development of science and society.

Today, most people have realised the importance of healthy. They start to do exercise,to climb mountants, to eat vegetables without insecticide.  All of these will help people to live longer. With the help of science, people will live much longer.

MS.Lily would be better.
Her first love not her lover she married.
Do you think so?

Why do you think so?