Destiny
I met you on such a fine day,
Your complexion seemed worthy of mention.
You were wearing that overcoat in the usual way,
And coming towards me in contemplation.
But that was not all you brought ,
Around you the kids were singing a song,
Which I had once been taught,
Then, I knew this scene would last long.
I was so much struck by this harmony.
I had already regarded you as my one and only.
That I belonged to you was my destiny,
Since you always made a strong impression on me.
So long I have one breath left,
The heart in loving you still beat.
这首诗是仿照英国莎士比亚的十四行诗写的，语言也很简单，我在这儿写这首诗目的在于抛砖引玉，使那些富于英语写作能力的高手到原创空间练练笔。外语学习版的两位版主会很认真的看您的作品，对有内容的作品给予一定的威望奖励（详情见版面公告）！多多参与哟！
咱们外语学习自改版以来还未有人发表过原创作品，我就做第一个吃螃蟹的人吧！大家可不要无动于衷哟！
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发表于 2004-7-27 12:58:54
发表于 2004-7-27 20:28:30
