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发表于 2006-5-5 22:09:49
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这样的文章不能作“英语教学范文” ！！！
英语写作之所以难，主要难在我们的英文写作意识上。谈到英文写作，大家比较一致的想法是“写英语作文，只要我有话可说、用词得当、语法正确就能搞定”；大家学写作的精力也主要集中在审题立意、句型句式和词形词义上。这种想法往往会忽略英汉文章结构间的思维差异，模糊英汉语言的结构性区别。
因此，一定要树立正确的英语写作意识，突出做好英语思维和汉语思维的调适、英汉语言的转换、逻辑关系的隐性和显形表达。这样才能写出象样的英语文章。
请比较楼主所贴文章和本贴所列文章的标题、结构，分析篇章的展开方式。
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Environmental Pollution
People all over the world today are beginning to hear and learn more and more about the problem of pollution. Pollution is caused either by man's release of completely new and often artificial substances into the environment, or by releasing greatly increased amounts of a natural substance, such as oil from oil tankers into the sea.
The whole industrial process which makes many of the goods and machines we need and use in our daily lives, is bound to create a number of waste products which upset the environmental balance, or the ecological balance as it is also known. Many of these waste products can be prevented or disposed of sensibly, but clearly while more and more new and complex goods are produced there will be new, dangerous wastes to be disposed of, for example, the waste products from nuclear power stations. Many people, therefore, see pollution as only part of a larger and more complex problem, that is, the whole process of industrial production and consumption of goods. Others again sec the problem mainly in connection with agriculture, where new methods are helping farmers grow more and more on their land to feed our ever-increasing populations. However, the land itself is gradually becoming worn out as it is being used, in some cases, too heavily, and artificial fertilizers cannot restore the balance.
Whatever its underlying reasons, there is no doubt that much of the pollution caused could be controlled if only companies, individuals and governments would make more efforts. In the home there is an obvious need to control litter and waste. Food comes wrapped up three or four times in packages that all have to be disposed of; drinks are increasingly sold in bottles or tins which cannot be reused. This not only causes a litter problem, but also is a great waste of resources, in terms of glass, metals and paper. Advertising has helped this process by persuading many of us not only to buy things we neither want nor need, but also to throw away much of what we do buy. Pollution and waste combine to be a problem everyone can help to solve by cutting out unnecessary buying, excess consumption and careless disposal of the products we use in our daily lives. |
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