第十一期有奖写作练习(1个威望)

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第十一期有奖写作练习(1个威望)




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写作题目:1.最开心的日子
        2.最愉快的时刻
        3.小时候.........


      
      

  
要求:有点抒情.要真实!

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agldacheng

The happiest days of mine
Now I am working for living. I miss the days when I was in college very much, which is maybe the happiest time till now.
I had never been to a big city before I arrived at the railway station of Harbin. The biggest place I had been to was Fushun before that time. So I felt it so exciting. So many tall buildings stand in front of me.
For the first semester of my college life I felt that the life style was so relaxed, I did not need to attend self-studying course if would not do that. I would have spare time even during week days. One day of the semester, there was a lecture given by a post-doctor, which is available to us. Guys of my dorm all went to the auditorium to listen to him. I remember the guy who gave the lecture is a young man maybe in his early thirties at that time. He showed us how the advanced technology was performed referring to its application in some law cases. The principle of the technology is marvelous. After his narrate some questions were raised by some people there. Some of the questions were really challenging that the tutor of the post-doctor had to interrupt the question. Those scenes were only available for in the tv before I went to college.
The time came along was interesting too. I found that the library was so great, there are so many beautiful and expensive books that so charming. I can not help borrowed five new books at one time, the number of books permitted. In the third year of my college life, a new library was completed, the building is splendid. The ground floor is the office zone. The first floor is the studying- area, the upper three floors are book-borrowing area, magazines-viewing area and multimedia area. If I wanted to surf the internet. I would go to the fourth floor and the expenditure per hour is 1 yuan.
Right now I have graduated from college, how I wonder I can be a student in the college again. I miss the days very much.

xuyongtong

When I was a little child

This title reminds an old and famous English song "Yesterday One More","When I was young,I listened to the radio,waiting for my favorite song......"I heard this song almost 12 years ago,when I was only a junior middle school student in grade one.I'd like to share a story here,about my English learning experiece.It's likely that my friends here had the similar situation.
When I met English language for the first time, it was really fresh and exiting to me,just think that I can say the things around me in another different sound while others may be staring at me with surprise and admiration.And it was also very interesting for the beginners to find the way of learning,they may use various methods they can find.Imitation was a most popular way among us,when we explained the English pronouciation with Chinese characters,a lot of fun could be found,especially when the local accent was used.In this way,I get my first step to learn this language,and it's easy for a young child to do so.But when I wantet to go further,a lot of difficulties came to me,and I found it boiling when just recite the sentences.
One day,when hearing my sister singing a fair-sounding song,I was refreshed and I asked her to teach me this song.It was the fist English song I learned,the sound was really beautiful.After that my interest arose again and I went on study with pleasure.As the time went on,my knowledge of this language accumulated and I began to search more things about it,the meaning in it.Gradually I got a feeling of another thinking way,and found it interesting to describe in this new approach...
Well,all things are difficult before they are easy,learning English is also in the same way.Work hard and learn with your heart,and you will find a lot in your learning experience.

maillirq

Good memories of my childhood!
How time flies ! I'm not young any more. I will be 26 years old next month,in the corner of marriage. My grilfrined and i will go into the hall of marriage next month. When i look back of my life , so many memories emerge in my mind.
I was very naughty when i was youny, climbing tress,fighting,and escaping from lessons. If i think carefully,i can still remember clearly that my farther only beated me twice throughout my childhood. The first was because i had escaped from lessons and played with several buddies in the beach of  river, my dad gave a depressed lesson to me to remind me not to wasting the precious time. Dad gave me another slap lesson for i swam in the river in summer noon alone. I went to swim without parent's permission by myself, i swam from 12:00 o'clock AM to 2:00 PM. When i was a little tired i planned to go to home quickly ,but unfortunately it rained heavily later, so i went my school to take a hide. As to a 6 year-old kid, i slept in my classroom alone. When i woke up , i went home and got one slap from my dad, later i knew that the whole family and many neighbours had been along  the river in search of me for several hours, and my aunt slipped and hurt her leg.My parent feared to death,thought i had drown.If i didn't appeared then, they would dive into the river,and search the river up and down.You can image the nervous scene and how dreadful my parents were...
So when i appeared , my dad gave a very very happy slap on my face,i can understand his love from that slap now. I love my family. I love my dad !

quickfast

My happiest time
Love is memorable for there are too much happy there.  My happiest time come when I am falling in love with a lovely girl. Cupid sends me my angel. She is cute smart and so tender that i can not help to loving her. Over a time pursuit, she accept me ,and  regards me as her only lover. I am very excited We love each other very much. That is so sweet a time that enen though we get seperated today I will also thanks for her ,for the pleasant time she brings me .
Then, I am a Sophomore, she is just a freshman.and for that is my first love I value it a lot  we stay together all day,could not bear even a minute’s absensence of each other the that is really a great sense! She likes do shopping ,i take her by my bike to the downtown she will sit at the back of my bike with her arms Around my waist.,all the way will leave our happy laugh although we usually buy nothing but we feel very delighted.Basketball is my favorite  When I was playing basketball she would stand quietly by the playground to watch me ,and every eye contact with her will  encourage me a lot, we always eat together, often we share  one piece of meal on account that she ate little for the good shape, so I need not to get another one. while at the dinne we often feed each other regardless  the jealous eyes around .Every time after the supper i will accompany her to the classroom to study,we help with each other  and get progress in common we often discuss with each other and sometimes have a argument but I will always give in to end it .
After that we will go to he end of the teaching building to see the sky full with star hand in hand  Comfortably in my arm she will count the stars in the sky and I will tell her my syory when I am a boy until very late…….
She is a very pretty girl and she have ever brought me a memorable happiest time!

momoidream

the happiest day
if someone asked me which days were you happiest, I never gave him the answers. Because in my departed life, there were many days that I felt happy and warm. so here I only narrated some days during the period of university.
When I were grade three, my chums and I were charmed by the game. At that time we played a game named "StarCraft". The PRG was developed by Blizzard Entertainment Company. Since it appeared, it was popular with the people over the world; the people of Korea were crazy with it specially.
Because we had not own computers, we usually went to net bar to fight by using four vs four or one vs one. We so loved the game that we couldn’t help cutting school for playing a while. In our class, all of men were interesting in this game, so it was easy to call enough number of people to fight each other all the night in the net bar.
The game had three races, I liked the Protoss. At first, my skill of fighting was poor and was beat by others. I hate to be a failure, by practiced more and more, finally I became a superior of my class. We also fight with the stranger, in this way, we made lots of friends and built a game team. Every day we talked about the tactics, the micro-handle, the virtue or flaw of three races, the new news of international game and so on. Later there was a StarCraft game in my school, one hundred students joined took part in and included about us. To my woeful, I lost the game in the semifinal. And to my happy, I found lots of StarCraft fans in own school.
Now, I have graduated one year. But when I recalled those days, I couldn’t help smiling and felt amused.

xuyixuyan

The happiest days of mine is in NanJing Forestry University’s life,in here there is a lot of classmates,friends.
Now, I am a teacher in shenyang,but,to frankly speaking,I yearn in the past university’s time,because,first, I had never see to a big city before my university’s life So I felt it so exciting. So many tall buildings stand in front of me because my parent is farmer so that I grew up in countryside.second.my classmate become acquaintance in classroom or dormitory in the NanJing Forestry University,they come from every province of ZhongGuo,such as liaoning guangdong,shanghai city,and so on,everyone bring different from the culture,I learn a amount of knowledge from ereryone such as to coordinate the relation of classmate and so on
So ,in short ,I think my the happiest days is in NanJing Forestry University’s life,my view have got width even to change my philosophy.university time impact on my life

一杯绿茶

The happiest moment in my life

    As the time is going,many great things of my life faded in my memory.It is so hard for me to find the happiest moment in my life.because some happy time maybe can't be reminded,and recent periods of my life can't be content to me,even a little sad,lack of the happy feeling.Having tough searched my foregone life,I find one moment which is the happiest one for me eventually.
    on one evening  in the winter of 2003,I had graduated from my university not long ago,and enrolled the army ,became a fresh soldier later.For training task which is arranged by superior,I was sent to Baoji military base for three months long exercitation.The base is founded on a high desolate mountain. It was so strange to me that I found very lonely and confused in my fore time  in the base.But in that evening,the situation changed.I had my meal that night as my used to do,and I had a idea of going for a walk to the top of the mountain suddenly.So I walked along the mountain road which was tough and narrow for the top after supper.I did't know how high the mountain was,and whether I could reach the top.The sun had set down for long time that moment,and the moonlight was so clear and bright that I could continue my walk in the dark evening.The road was surrounded by many soaring pines,and a little brook nearby.In the walk,I experienced a new feeling that I never found in any other time and place.The way was only  illuminated by moon,and the surrounding was so  pacific and sequestered,the sound you could hear was only sent by the brook which was greatly grace.Moreover I was the exclusive person in the road.The feeling is great,I found my dejected mood diverted soon,my mind was very clear and active,any annoyance to me was taken behind.So I continued the walk happily,and reached the top finally......
   Maybe you will say analogous feeling can't come to you in that moment,but I really found happy that time.I consist that it is my happiest moment.If you have some troublesand difficulties,I recommend you to take a walk in a natural and quiet place,it will benefit the change of your bad mood certainly!

[fly]The Happiest Moment[/fly]

   One day in the beginning of 20th centuary, I was giving a lecture to the student in the Middle School of my hometown. Then came the staff who dealt with letters and mails. He knocked at the door and hand me a letter, on the envelope of which was the name of the graduate school I had dreamed of for several years.

   The class having been dismissed, I read the letter in my dormitory. You know, I was so excited that I was afraid of showing my feeling in public, which could be a threat or unhappiness to others in the school of that little town. From the admission I know I was not only enrolled but also the one in the list of graduates who will study at public expense, i.e. there was no need for me to turn in the tuition fee. Perfect!

   I cannot help reflecting something happened in recent months. There are some people trying to persuade me to take some measures to ensure my enrollment, for instance, sent a sum of money to the guy who was in charge of the process of enrollment. I smiled and did not take care of it. But after hearing the same saying again and again, I became a little worried. I began to doubt whether I should take such measures. I took out a paper and wrote down what I thought, including the advantage and disadvantage, necessary and unnecessary to do so. Then I came to a conclusion, i.e. it is no necessary. Why? My logic was simple. How could all the graduate schools refuse to accept an applicant with an excellent score and bright prospective? If money was the prerequisite for enrollment, I would give up.

   Then you know I was right. After all, our society need those who have genuine ability and learning to construct our socialism and to develop China.

luotianhua

Proud to be a part-time worker

    There isn’t much time left for this smester. You will soon enjoy an exciting summer vacation. Well, before that, you must hit books for the coming final examinations. I am expecting my vacation too, because I will visit home then. But just like what you are doing now, I am working hard on papers and exams, and my work! I have a part-time job. I am an employee and student.

Earn my own living

     Why did I go to part-time? Many of my friends have asked me the same question. I have less time for my study. And I can’t freely enjoy the life in this vibrant British capital. Mmm, it sounds like that I have lost a lot because of my part-time job. Well, here is my honest answer: I really need to work to earn my living.

     Everyone knows that studying abroad requires a lot of money. For example, the tuition fee for an overseas student is much higher than that for a local one. It is usually 10 times higher! Besides, I have to pay the rent. As you may know, living in London is crazily expensive. Sharing the apartment with friends and taking a part-time job are my two ways to solve the problem.  

     I worried about nothing but my schoolwork when I was at your age in China. Since the moment I left for the UK, I have clearly felt the harshness of living and come to understand my parents better.

My first part-time job interview

     I still remember the interview of my first job. I wore a suit that day for the first time in my life. When I saw the manager, I was so nervous that my whole body was shaking and couldn’t say a word. The manager was nice and told me to relax and said “we just do a few small talks”. His smile did make me feel relaxed. He then asked me questions like “Why do you want this job?”, and  “Do you have any work experience?” I answered the questions as well as I could. When he told me “That’s it,” I realized that the interview had finished. He said he would send me a letter if I got the job.

     After a few days, I got the letter from the manager and I finally got the job! That was the happiest day in my life!

travis

The Happiest Moment

I am a fun of the football team Milan. It used to be the single best team in Europe. However, from 1996,it experienced a long period of crisis. Although it won the Italian league champion in 1999, in the rest of time, it could not rival the other clubs in Italy and Europe. In 2003, a new Milan appeared. The key figures in the team includes coach Carlo Ancelotti, striker Andriy Shevchenko and Fillipo Inzaghi, and midfielder Rui Costa. However, the most important change was the participation of Alexendra Nesta, one of the best defenders in the world. In the new season, Milan won and won in the matches. However, after the 1:2lose to Juventus, the prospect of winning league title became more and more unrealistic. Thus the attention of the team moved to the European Champion League. After beating severe opponents like Bayern Munich and Real Madrid, in the quarter final, Milan met the most dangerous moment. In the final minute of the match against Ajax, Milan was still in a desperate situation. But Fillipo Inzaghi's goal saved the whole season, and the job of Ancelotti. In the semi final, Milan beat his cousin Inter on away goal. It met Juventus again in the final. Milan controled the situation on the pitch. Shevchenko's goal was judged as invalid by the referee, Inzaghi's head was saved by Juventus goalkeeper Buffon, and Rui Costa's long shot missed the goal slightly. After 120 minutes of playing, the score was still 0-0, so the champion had to be decided by penalty kick. Both teams performed badly in the penalty kick. Juventus missed three in five shots, and Milan missed two in the first four shots. The final shot was taken by Shevchenko. He scored with ease and finished the match. Milan became the master of Europe after nine years. With this victory, the confidence of the players grew significantly, and the club became quite attractive to the potential players in the world. The moment that Sheva scored the final goal, I think, is my happiest moment.

deltoid

The happiest day in my whole life

That travel i and my mother went to Nan hua temple is the happiest in my life.

"Mother, the car coming, we get it."
" oh, good to."mother  stand with a basket, there are many things in it, the chicken was killed last night, the meat  buyed yesterday morning, and also with some money Mingbi, and candles. We are ready to Nahua temple Wishing to peace.

I don't beleive there are gods in the heaven, but on the counter Nanhuasi the reputation, I have to risk of my life paternity mother. We first came to saying it was a Buddhist temple,  mother brought the chicken meat with sweets and so everyone in the table, and then point Tears inserted good, and then lit incense. Mother of a half hours of incense to me, and then led me to kneel down on the mat, she lightly with his hands, closed their eyes "to Buddha and various gods bless our family safe, a happy heart, I would like to be home, safe from his book were found good work, finding good people."

I continued to be much interest with the introduction of mother, because I think this is what I should do. I like the quiet here, the people naturally relaxed, all happy and unhappy things seem to vanish, only fresh air, quiet and comfortable. "Mother, tired it, you first look at this beautiful spring break, I buy two water back," "good, slow Point Oh.Do not tired bad."" know."I am running away and running back, feeling especially happy. "Look, all call your slow connection, you do not listen to me."

  I do not know how to say, watching mother smile, my heart was filled with what appears to be.

天官

A Brother Like That
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
　　A friend of mine named Paul received an automobile
from his brother as a Christmas present. On Christmas Eve
when Paul came out of his office, a street urchin[1] was
walking around the shiny new car, admiring it.

　　"Is this your car, Mister?" he said.

　　Paul nodded. "My brother gave it to me for Christmas."
The boy was astounded[2]. "You mean your brother gave it
to you and it didnt cost you nothing? Boy, I wish . . ."
He hesitated.

　　Of course Paul knew what he was going to wish for. He
was going to wish he had a brother like that. But what the
lad said jarred Paul all the way down to his heels.

　　 "I wish," the boy went on, "That I could be a brother
like that."

　　Paul looked at the boy in astonishment[3], then
impulsively he added, "Would you like to take a ride in my
car?"

　　 "Oh yes, Id love that."

　　After a short ride, the boy turned with his eyes aglow
[4], said, "Mister, would you mind driving in front of my
house?"

　　Paul smiled a little. He thought he knew what the lad
wanted. He wanted to show his neighbors that he could ride
home in a big automobile. But Paul was wrong again. "Will
you stop where those two steps are?" the boy asked.

　　He ran up the steps. Then in a little while Paul heard
him coming back, but he was not coming fast. He was
carrying his little crippled[5] brother. He sat him down
on the bottom step, then sort of squeezed up against him
[6] and pointed to the car.

　　"There she is, Buddy[7], just like I told you
upstairs. His brother gave it to him for Christmas and it
didnt cost him a cent. And some day Im gonna give you
one just like it . . . then you can see for yourself all
the pretty things in the Christmas windows that Ive been
trying to tell you about."

　　Paul got out and lifted the lad to the front seat of
his car. The shining-eyed older brother climbed in beside
him and the three of them began a memorable holiday ride.
　That Christmas Eve, Paul learned what Jesus meant when
he said: "It is more blessed to give[8] . . . "

　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　－－Dan Clark

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