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下面是引用jeson_1030于2005-10-21 23:37发表的:
原本想写望尘莫及，结果发现自己连尘埃都没赶上！还是去面壁好了！
sun，又在谦虚了，呵呵~~：）
其实，有个朋友在看了我的诗之后认为最后那句有些牵强呢。
这是他的评论：
Good on you, mate! I have learnt a lot from you, however, I don't really agree with your view on your last line. China following Russia and USA is the third country that can send man into space, therefore we are not the ONLY nation that dwarfs the rest of world in space technology. Well, it is just my personal opinion.
Cheers
这是我的回复：
your appreciation of my poem is encouraged me to do more, as inject 100 billion tons of strength into my body and soul~Well, with your post, I can see what you mean, in reality China are not the ONLY nation in this space technology. That's true, however, as far as I am concerned, not only is POEM describe the world virtually with different words and different sentences, but also express mankind's most profound thoughts, firmest beliefs, most romantic feelings, and best wishes for future.
On the other hand, it is very much alike between poem and novel in some aspects. Using 《Heroes In the Society》 as an example, it is Jin Yong's writing. The main character in the novel is Ling Huchong, who is a brave and unconstrained young swordsman. Despite the fact that he is inferior to 任我行 and 东方不败 in martial arts, he laughs last, as the book's hero.
As I have said above, I can think of no better illustration than a classic proverb which goes like this: "He laughs best who laughs last."
Thank you~~：） |
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发表于 2005-10-19 23:17:03
西西~~摆擂台一个，你敢挑战吗？
发表于 2005-10-21 23:06:34
reader哥哥又在拿我开心了哈~~~嘿嘿~~
