我的翻译：送小孩到国外去学习须谨慎从事，请多多指教

送小孩到国外去学习须谨慎从事
it should be cautious to send your children to study abroad
现在越来越盛行送十几岁的小孩子到国外留学，人数在急剧增加。他们的家长对国外的教育抱有不切实际的幻想。外国院校举办的教育展览把国外的学校说得天花乱坠，使他们听了介绍之后便心动变为行动。
it is more and more popular that the teenage children are sent to study abroad, and the amount is sharply increasing. Their parents are presuming upon overseas education impractically. The education exhibition made by overseas schools describes themselves extravagantly and colorfully. The wishes of the parents would be come into truth after instruction learnt from the education exhibition.
可是，把小孩子送到国外学习并不一定会带来好的结果。许多学生缺乏适应性和灵活性，他们很难溶入国外新的环境。由于在文化上难以适应，即缺乏在国外陌生环境下生存的能力，他们往往会受到所谓“文化震荡”的冲击。缺乏必要的观察能力，使他们难以理解东道主国家人民的行为表现，他们也就无法与当地人打成一片。缺乏适应性以及交流和交往能力必然会使自己感到孤立。
However, the truth that the children sent to study abroad does not always lead to success. A lot of students are so absent of adaptability and flexibility that they hardly melt in the new circumstances. They sometimes will be struck by the so-called “cultural Shock”. Because their difficulty of adaptability, which namely is the disability of survival in an strange environment. On the other hand, the shortage of the necessary observation also leads to their non-comprehension of the local residents’ behavior. Naturally, they can’t get along well with local people. In conclusion, the lonely feeling must result from the absence of adaptability and communication.
感到孤独和在生活上不能自理（由于他们的家长对他们过于溺爱和娇惯）他们会经常想家和情绪低落。更重要的是，由于他们在学习上没有打好坚实的基础，不能适应外语环境下的学习。由于他们缺乏独立学习的能力，所以就不可能取得所期望的进步。
the lonely feeling and dependence on their parents (because of overindulgence from their parents) occur to them the family and cause bad mood. It’s more important that they can’t be accommodated the foreign language study surroundings due to the stable foundation. Also they are impossible to receive the expected progress owning to the shortage of independent learning.
于是，许多人便不得不半途而废，放弃来之不易的学习机会。因此，过早地送小孩子到国外学习不一定是件好事情。
Then many of them may give up the hard-won opportunity on the halfway. Therefore, it is not always a good thing to send the children to study abroad.
如果想要让孩子到国外去见见世面，可以让他们集体参加短期的国外游学项目，住在外国人的家里，参加暑期班的学习，在所在地开展一些旅游活动。但这些团组必须有专门的老师陪同，提供全程性的指导和帮助。
If you’d like to send your children to see the world, you can get your children to take part in the short period visit program abroad, to live in the local foreigner’s home, or to take vacation class and join some journey. However, the teams should be accompanied by special teachers and given full-life direction and help.

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Welcome, our new friends----anybeally
Thank you for bringing us such excellent translation for the first time and hope you can come here and communicate with others frequently

thank you very much~~~~~~~~~

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To anybeally,
你的翻译很不错.根据你的译文将几个句子做了些须修改,仅供参考.


[the number is sharply increasing]

[The education exhibitions by overseas schools give extravagant and colorful descriptions of their schools, which inspire wishes of the parents into actions.]

[However, it does not pay to send children to study abroad. A lot of students are so absent of adaptability and flexibility that they hardly melt themselves in the new circumstances. They sometimes will be struck by the so-called “culture Shock” because of their lack of cultural adaptability, which is actually the disability of survival in an strange environment.]

[On the other hand, the shortage of the necessary observation also leads to their non-comprehension of the local residents’ behavior. Naturally, they can’t get along well with local people. And the absence of adaptability and communication is bound to result in
a lonely feeling.]

[The lonely feeling and dependence on their parents (because of overindulgence from their parents) bring them frequent homesickness and bad mood.] What’s more, they can’t be accustomed to their study in the foreign language due to their poor foundation for learning. And they can’t make the expected progress owning to their shortage of independent learning ability.]

[Then many of them may give up the hard-won opportunity halfway. Therefore, it is not necessarily a good thing to send children to study abroad. ]

[If you’d like to send your children to see the world, they can take part in the short international study project, where they will live in the local foreigner’s home, take vacation classes and join some journeys. And the visiting teams should be accompanied by special teachers to give immediate direction and help.]

i see，thank you for your instruction。
can i have your qq number？i hope i can talk with you in english and give me  some guidence。look forward your answer。