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介绍性的章节占了全书三分之一（50页），主要是原作者对译诗的一些看法。本来打算细读并翻译的，想想还是先略过，直接从诗里头钻去。
布洛推崇迦梨陀娑（天城文：कालिदास，拉丁化：Kālidāsa），在第三章选了《鸠摩罗出世》(Sanskrit: कुमारसम्भव, IAST: Kumāra-sambhava)的iii.24-43颂。现在我根据阿志吉的马来译文再翻译（第三度移译），然后再附上原文看看。
马来文：
Dan dalam kandung hutan gunung ini sampai,
Kemahiran mengelakkan fikir wali dari syurga,
Musim Bunga muda bangkit menguap dan tangan melambai,
Teman terkasih dari dewi cinta.
我的译文：
避思技艺从天堂直达山林胎内，青春由爱神处伸展向情侣招手。
原文http://www.sub.uni-goettingen.de ... _kavya/kakumspu.htm：
tasmin vane saṃyamināṃ munīnāṃ tapaḥsamādheḥ pratikūlavartī /
saṃkalpayoner abhimānabhūtam ātmānam ādhāya madhur jajṛmbhe // Ks_3.24 //
按说马来文的天堂除了Syurga还有Indra Kayangan，后者与梵文关系密切，但是这里一点端倪没有。继续下一颂吧。
Mentari terik belum musimnya bangun terjaga
Utara akan kekasihnya, dan Selatan yang lembut
Melepaskan keluh, dan ditinggalkan jejaka
Nafas segar lahir dari wangi mulut.
艳阳北朝爱侣未从季节里苏醒
柔南娇斥、远离由蜜语生出的清气
kuberaguptāṃ diśam uṣṇaraśmau gantuṃ pravṛtte samayaṃ vilaṅghya /
dig dakṣiṇā gandhavahaṃ mukhena vyalīkaniḥśvāsam ivotsasarja // Ks_3.25 //
同样无法从方位词南北看出什么和梵语的关系。
但是从这个逐字解说的http://www.giirvaani.net/giirvaani/ks/sarga/01_ks.htm
马来文北方(Utara)和梵语uttarasyāṁ的关系是很明显的。可惜没有第三颂的分析。
真有无从下手的感觉，去找找看旧书的英译：
http://www.archive.org/search.php?query=kumarasambhavam
MR Gale:
24. In the forest Madhu (the vernal season) manifested himself having assumed his proper form, which was an object of pride to the mind-born One (Kaama), acting antagonistically to the performance of austerities of the sages practising self-restraint.
25. When the hot-rayed one (sun) began to go towards the quarter guarded by Kubera (the North) out of the proper season, the Southern quarter sent forth wind from her mouth like a sign of anguish.
RTH Griffith:
How fair was SPRING! --to fill the heart with love!
And lure the Hermit from his thoughts above,
In that pure grove he grew so heavenly bright
That KAAMA's envy wakend at the sight.
Now the bright Day-God turned his burning ray,
to where KUVERA holds his royal sway,
while the sad South in the whispering breezes sighed,
And mourned his absence like a tearful bride. |
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