Smiley's People汉译8
本帖最后由 agent124 于 2023-11-9 10:15 编辑She had seen it yesterday, she had seen it the day before, and for all she knew, the day before that as well—my Lord, she was not a walking diary!
她昨天见过这张脸，前天也见过，记得大前天也见过————老天！她可不是行走的日记，把路过看到的都记下来。
For the last three or four days, this weak, itchy giant, waiting for a bus or hovering on the pavement outside the warehouse, had become a figure of the street for her; and what was more, a figure of a recognisable type, though she had yet to put her finger on which.
过去的三四天里，这个看上去没什么力量，焦躁不安的巨人，或在等公交车，或在货栈外的人行道上徘徊，对她来说已经成了街上的一个标志性人物，而且看得出属于某种类型的人物，尽管她还不确定是哪种类型。
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She thought he looked traqué—hunted—as so many Parisians did these days.
她觉得那人看上去像是被追捕的人，近来，许多巴黎人都像是这种人。
She saw so much fear in their faces; in the way they walked yet dared not greet each other.
从他们的脸上，从他们虽然走在一起却不敢互相打招呼这点来看，她能读出深深的恐惧。
Perhaps it was the same everywhere, she wouldn’t know.
也许到处都是这样的，她无从知道。
Also, more than once, she had felt his interest in her.
而且，她不止一次感到那人很注意她。
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