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[[求助与讨论]] Weight loss made easy.

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发表于 2007-11-27 21:47:30 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
The number one way we burn calories is exercise, number two is digesting food. Ask you doctor how many calories you should eat in a day to control your weight, Divide this by five. Eating five smaller meals spread out over a day will actually fool our body into burning more calories by working all day.
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发表于 2007-11-27 23:07:08 | 显示全部楼层
Weight loss made easy.


The number one way we burn calories is exercise, number two is digesting food. Ask you doctor how many calories you should eat in a day to control your weight, Divide this by five. Eating five smaller meals spread out over a day will actually fool our body into burning more calories by working all day.

there are punctuation problems (marked by ()) in the following floor
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发表于 2007-11-27 23:08:30 | 显示全部楼层
Some problems in your essey:
Weight loss made easy(.)


The number one way we burn calories is exercise(,) number two is digesting food. Ask you doctor how many calories you should eat in a day to control your weight(,) Divide this by five. Eating five smaller meals spread out over a day will actually fool our body into burning more calories by working all day.

1. punctuation (marked by ())
2. "spread out " shall be "distributed", I think.
3. "our body", may be "our bodies".

Excuse me for my boldness.
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发表于 2007-11-27 23:26:45 | 显示全部楼层
Weight loss made easy.


The number one way we burn calories is exercise, another is via digesting food. Ask your doctor how many calories you should daily to control your weight, then, divide this by five. Having five smaller meals spread over a day will actually fool our body into burning more calories by working all day.
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