"台灣的物價漲的很快很高" 的几种表达有什么问题？

readok2009

The price of goods rise so quickly and so( ?) in Taiwan.?
The price,which rise the more faster and the more expensiver in Taiwan. ?
price index increased quickly to a high level in Taiwan.
The prices in Taiwan have been growing up dynamically.
Prices soar in Taiwan.

白草折

楼下贴将楼主贴改正，合乎主题要求。我的贴专去说当今台湾真实的物价(贵在食物价)，文不对题，删了。

glen1111

引用第0楼readok2009于2007-11-07 07:20发表的 "台灣的物價漲的很快很高" 的几种表达有什么问题？ :
The price of goods rise so quickly and so( ?) in Taiwan.?
The price,which rise the more faster and the more expensiver in Taiwan. ?
price index increased quickly to a high level in Taiwan.
The prices in Taiwan have been growing up dynamically.
Prices soar in Taiwan.
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权且分别编号为句1-句5:
句1应改为: The price of goods rises so quickly and soared so high in Taiwan.
    rise 可以说rise to a high level, 但不能说rise high. 建议改为两个动词更好点（注意动词单三加s）。

句2应改为:The goods, price of which rises more and more fast, becomes more and more expensive in Taiwan.
   price 不能与expensive 搭配，而goods可以;
  同样由于与quickly 与expensive 搭配的词不同，故不能用the more...the more...句型。
  同时注意the more 后面用原型， 不能用faster。

句3应改为: The price index in Taiwan increased to a high level in such a speed.
       或：The price index in Taiwan increased to a high level so quickly.  
  首先是首字母要大写，特指要加the。
  其次the price index是指的是台湾的物价指数，那么修饰语紧跟被修饰语较好，不会引起误会， 故in Taiwan 调到前面。

句4应改为rices in Taiwan have been growing dynamically.
  复型名词常用零冠词。
  growing 包含up的意思，故不用growing up 而用growning。

句5应改为rices in Taiwan is soaring.
       或：Prices in Taiwan soared.
  Taiwan位置调整同句3, 另外soar在时态上常用ing或ed， 但用soar并不错（可表示常常发生或经常的动作，但ing或ed更常用）,句1中soar的改动也是这个道理。