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第一段，引出图表，介绍并比较数据
1. According to the graph
引出图表的几种说法：
As it show in the graph/diagram…
line graph 线图
pie chart 饼图
bar chart 横向的柱状图
histogram 柱状图
it is said/reported that
=it is often makes the headline of newspapers…
Statistics show that…
2. the rise and fall of the rate of car accidents in(Walton City varies with the seasons.
表示高高低低上上下下的含义的短语：
ups and downs 沉浮
ebb and flow 潮起潮落 盛衰
vary 也可以用fluctuate代替，fluctuate表示波动上下起伏的变化.
3. From January to March last year it increased by 45%, from… （数据法，除了百分数和年份以外，其他所有的数据都忌用阿拉伯数字）
4.…and from June to August there was a steep rise of 50%…
Steep 陡峭的 可用以下单词替换：
dramatic drastic sharp sudden rapid
表示上升的词汇：go up climb jump rise increase
表示下降的词汇：go down fall plunge
5.However,there was a steady decrease,…
steady 稳定的，平缓的 ：slight graduate (逐渐的) slow
第二段：分析数据产生的原因
6. There are three reasons for this improvement.(俗，忒俗)
理由的陈述可以使用理由段公式，该句可以换成以下写法：
Analysts from SASS(Shanghai Academy of Social Science) believe that at least three factors contribute to this improvement.
The first and the foremost reason of great importance is that …
7. A traffic safety campaign has made all the local people aware of the …
campaign: movement (1.指物体的位移；2.政治运动；3.手术后的第一次肠蠕动；)
promotion (1.推广活动；2促销；3.晋升；)
8. second, more people are using bicycles for transportation.
表示越来越多的人： a growing population…
第三段：结论部分,总结和展望
9. So,I am confident that there will be fewer car accident in Walton in the future.
“So” 最好不要用
More than two thirds of the residents in Walton City, there for., predict with full confidence that …
表示在将来: in the near future (在不久的将来)
In the foreseeable future (在可预见的将来)
将讲义18页上的表格补充完整
名词 动词 词组
上升 growth
rise
increase
raise ascend
grow
mount
lever up
shoot up reach a peak
go up hill
be on the rise
下降 decrease
reduction
decline lessen
lever down
sink
shrink touch the bottom
go down hill
be on the decline
稳定 bottom
summit
peak hold
remain
maintain have the largest
percentage
occupy the lion’s share
不稳定 fluctuation
change fluctuate
vary rise and full
ebb and flow
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发表于 2007-7-16 07:10:52