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发表于 2007-5-20 00:54:44 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
这是我在 第二十五期论坛英语辩论活动 里发的.有人说有语法错误,望高手指出,从而可好好学习...
It's me to say that, between the book studies hard and earns how much with the

money, personal development is simply out of reach, even more what is the natural

view on the links.

Firstly:Studies hard, certainly ,not can explain the ability of a people that is strong. Has very many

such examples. In the university student which takes the present said. Have grandiose aims but

puny abilities, although the book is read some, but it falls short of practical ability. Pains or tired a

little in some sortis not willing to do.

Secondly:Studies hard, it does not mean that a person's quality and culture is good enough.In

2004 took place in university's The Ma Jiajue event,I think everybody of us remain fresh in one's

memory to it.This is a sharp-cut example.This is a word what said in prison:Without ideals, is the

greatest failure in my life.

Sum up:studies hard is not necessary for us.But a healthy person should have a

good outlook on life and values.
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发表于 2007-5-20 01:11:49 | 显示全部楼层
It's me to say that............................
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发表于 2007-5-20 07:56:26 | 显示全部楼层
Firstly:Studies hard, certainly ,not can explain the ability of a people that is strong


can not

a person
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发表于 2007-5-20 08:23:24 | 显示全部楼层
so good
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发表于 2007-5-20 10:24:54 | 显示全部楼层
studies hard ..........
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