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【原创】个人英文小诗一首:Decision

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发表于 2004-7-27 14:07:45 | 显示全部楼层 |阅读模式
Decision

I walked along the country road
Hurriedly to another place.
I was looking for a familiar face,
To see whether you were still one in the cold.

On the banks of the river,
We sat side by side on a stone
Appreciating the beauty belonging to us alone.
I hope it will last for ever.

The water changes with the seasons,
Enen though I am not sure
Whether this harmony can endure
I still hope to stay with you without any reasons!



为了配合咱们文学原创“我手与我心”的征文,活跃一下气氛,特写这首诗和大家共消遣!


望多多指教!

爱好创作的朋友不妨到外语学习上显示一下你的英文文笔!^_^
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发表于 2004-7-27 14:54:33 | 显示全部楼层
支持楼主,文学原创应该很赞成用英语写的侍。楼主在外语版的那首诗我更欣赏的哟!
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发表于 2004-7-27 17:58:48 | 显示全部楼层
[fly]I still hope to stay with you without any reasons![/fly]
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 楼主| 发表于 2004-7-27 19:14:39 | 显示全部楼层
下面是引用bily于2004-07-27 6:08 PM发表的 :
stay


Thank you for your  correction.
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hazeleyes 该用户已被删除
发表于 2004-7-27 19:33:41 | 显示全部楼层
Enen though I am not sure

Enen? Even?
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hazeleyes 该用户已被删除
发表于 2004-7-27 19:34:35 | 显示全部楼层
OOHH~~,DON'T MAKE YOUR DECISION IN SUCH A RUSH~~~
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发表于 2004-8-2 17:13:46 | 显示全部楼层
nothing can last for a life long
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发表于 2004-8-2 22:32:17 | 显示全部楼层
Only love is forever !
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