Love and Marriage（大家帮他改改－－agldacheng）

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Love and Marriage
Love and marriage are not the same kind of things.
Love and marriage are not the same things.

Love only involves two person and their emotion world.
For example,Love only involves a man and a woman and their emotional world.

A men and a woman could fall in love easily when they attract each other.
when attract each other, theyfall in love easily

However, marriage involves more than that------two persons's respective parents and other relatives and their feelings, their life.
However, marriage means more than that------their parents , relatives ,feelings, the life.

They should consider many more things if they want to build a family.
If they want to marry,They should consider more .

Because marriage means a kind of responsibility, not only responsable for themselves but also for a good libraryy of things related.
Because marriage means responsibility, not only responsable for themselves but also for their parents .

The common saying "Love he gives to you is the most important" is actually an excuse of escaping reality.
The common saying "Love he gives to you is the most important" is actually an excuse to escape reality.

There is no denying that the living condition is serious in modern society: the housing price is rising but salary is comparatively low.
What is more,there is no denying that the living condition is serious in modern society: the housing price is rising but salary is comparatively low.

We should admit that material foundation should be taken into consideration if you want to get married. Anyway, love is romantic while marriage is serious.
Belive it or not, the material foundation should be taken into consideration if you want to get married. In a word,, love is romantic while marriage is also serious.

yct01

Love and marriage are not the same thing. Love only involves two persons and their emotions world. A man and a woman can fall in love easily when they attract each other. However, marriage involves more than that------two persons's respective parents ,other relatives and their feelings and life. They should consider more things if they want to build a family. Because marriage means many kinds of responsibility, not only responsable for themselves but also for many related things . The common saying "Love he gives you is the most important" actually is an excuse of escaping the reality. There is no deny that the living conditions are serious in modern society: the housing price is rising quickly but salary comparatively lowly. We must admit that material foundation should be taken into consideration if you wanted to get married. Anyway, love is romantic while marriage is serious.

nicmajor

Love and marriage are not the same things. Only two persons are involved in love, while, when it comes to marrige,more things are involved in ,such as their parents and  relatives ,their affections and their life. So one should take more things into account if he want to get married.  The couple should not only be responsible for themselves but also for a variety of ralated things as marriage calls for more responsibility . A common saying "Love is the most important" is actually an excuse of escaping reality. As there is no denying that the housing problem are becoming more serious in modern society and the salary is comparatively low,we should admit that a person's ability should be taken into consideration if he(she) is the candidate of your marriage. Anyway, love is romantic but marriage is serious.


简略说几点
感觉原文整体衔接处理的不太好,且文中连词使用不当,且多处Chinglish太过明显.
involve用法不地道,或者改用分词形式involving,大家都没在意,跟着后面继续用
最后句用不适合用WHILE
在尊重原文的基础上做了些修改,希望大家拍砖  
帮人翻译商业项目还没这么认真过呢
希望可以多得点威望

wuyunshan

Although love and marriage are not the same kind of things,there are some relation between then.One cann't married to another if there is no love. Love involves two person and their emotion world. A men and a woman could fall in love  when they attract each other. Afterwards if they decided to married  they must think of the things such as two persons's respective parents and other relatives and their feelings, their life. They should consider many more things if they want to build a family. Because marriage means a kind of responsibility, not only responsable for themselves but also for a good libraryy of things related. The common saying "Love he gives to you is the most important" is actually an excuse of escaping reality. There is no denying that the living condition is serious in modern society: the housing price is rising but salary is comparatively low. We should admit that material foundation should be taken into consideration if you want to get married. Anyway, love is romantic while marriage is serious.

agldacheng

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