自己申请一家公司的实习生时写的自荐信，大家多多批评指正不足之处

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To Whom It May Concern,
    I’m applying for the summer interns’ project organized by METRO and Economics & Management School of Wuhan Univ. I seem to fit the position very well, full of ardor, with strong interest in business and also in METRO, outstanding ability in English both in written and spoken and so forth.
   According to the advertisement on the BBS, your position requires appliers who study in Economics & Management School of WHU. Though I major in an IT specialty, most of my energy has been being dedicated to my second specialty, Marketing Management, also in WHU. With strong interests in business and market, I study very hard and make continual progress day after day.
    Having taken part in some activities and taken some responsibilities, though haven’t achieved anything very great, I learned a lot from everything I joined. I am now self-confident with my communicating and harmonizing skills and I’m surely reliable for my integrity. And what’s more, team spirits have come into being in my soul. With the hope of learning and practicing in METRO, with the desire to take on more responsibilities in METRO, and with the idea that I’m glad to dedicate all I have to METRO, I would like to schedule an interview at your convenience.
   Thanks for your consideration.
   Faithfully,
   Y Wang

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To Whom It May Concern

不通也不好

I am now self-confident with my communicating and harmonizing skills

这个感觉有点问题，应该说communication and coordination skills好像比较妥

team spirits ：是想表达团队精神吗？那或许teamwork好一些

总体感觉不地道。。。。
个人意见，仅供参考，呵呵

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会2楼斑竹的话：
To Whom It May Concern
怎么会不通呢？  这是英语应用文中最常见的一种称呼方式，因为你不知道将要读你的信的人是谁！
请你查查资料再评论，不过还是谢谢你～～

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回3楼的朋友：
team spirits是团队精神的地道翻译，至于communication and coordination skills我觉得你说的有道理，谢谢你～～