为何我认为“英语写作绝对有用200句/英语写作必背200句” 不是”国外经典文章中的句子，是精华中的精华“？
这贴子的原意是提醒大家不要没头没脑的从网上载下来的东西背诵。网上有好的学习英语资料，但也有很多误人子弟的资料。请不要盲目的去学习。
**The intention of this article is to warn unsuspecting students not to believe what they read without question. There are a lot of good materials out there on the Internet, but there are also some very questionable ones masquerading as gems. Not only will you not learn good English by “reciting” those bad ones, but you will also pick up very bad language habits by doing so.***
网上流传甚广的”英语写作绝对有用200句/英语写作必背200句“不知源出何处。但有些贴子上有这个前题”以下写作经典200句背诵完会使你的写作水平突飞猛进，记住一定要烂熟于心，可以使用超循环背诵大表进行背诵，使背诵变得轻松有计划，更重要的是减少遗忘。200句并不多，永远是熟能生巧，你一辈子用的句子无非就是几十句，这200句是我们写作教学组6年时间提举出来的国外经典文章中的句子，是精华中的精华，不仅运用于写作，这些精彩的句式可以运用于口语中，使你的表达非凡！“ (i)
这些句子真的是” 国外经典文章中的句子，精华中的精华“吗？我想不是。我想这些是从国内学生的四，六级作文上抽出来的. 告诉别人”必背“，“使你的表达非凡！” 想会误人。
以下是200句的几句。你说是”精华中的精华“吗？
(摘自： 试修改‘英语写作绝对有用200句/英语写作必背200句’ http://www.rainlane.com/dispbbs.asp?boardid=11&id=19210
13 . A proper part-time job does not occupy students' too much time. In fact, it is unhealthy for them to spend all of time on their study. As an old saying goes: All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.
修改为 A proper part-time job would not occupy too much of a student’s time. In fact, it is unhealthy for them to spend all their time on their studies. As an old saying goes: “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.” (Please note this same quote is repeated in #79)
26. The information I've collected over last few years leads me to believe that this knowledge may be less useful than most people think.
修改为(The information…over the last few years…less useful than what most people think.)
27. Now, it is generally accepted that no college or university can educate its students by the time they graduation. 改为(--> by the time they graduate.)
44. It is commonly (改为 generally) accepted that no college or university can educate its students by the time they graduation (修改 graduate). (This is essentially the same as 27. My suspicion is that one is a partially corrected version from the same essay, with the second mistake missed.)
32. Although many people claim that, along with the rapidly economic development, the number of people who use bicycle are decreasing and bicycle is bound to die out. The information I've collected over the recent years leads me to believe that bicycle will continue to play extremely important roles in modern society.
修改: the rapidly economic development--> the rapid economic development; bicycle is bound to-->the bicycle is/bicycles are; that bicycle will continue--> the bicycle will/bicycles will.
#51 There is a general debate on the campus today over the phenomenon of college or high school students' doing a part-time job. (**This is obviously a sentence taken from a CET4/6 essay. I have read literally dozens of this type of sentence in students essays. Besides, students taking part time jobs would not be a “phenomenon” that is generally debated on campus in western universities.** There is simply no way this is a “6年时间提举出来的国外经典文章中的句子，是精华中的精华”
I don’t think I need to show more, although there are plenty more.
Chinese learning English websites are full of exaggerated claims. Even though these resources are free, that does not mean they can do no harm. So please, I beg of you, be very careful. Don’t follow the recommendation of “committing to memory “ before you check them out thoroughly.
我想我不用再多说。请各位不要被大吹大擂的标题所误度。学英语没有捷径的. 还是跟你们的老师一步一步的去学吧。
网上英语园地上有讨论 1 至 70 句的修改。连接 http://www.rainlane.com/dispbbs.asp?boardid=11&id=19210
(i) (i) Another person posted this on another BBS with the foreword “…这些句子是从近百篇雅思优秀作文中摘录下来并经反复推敲提炼而成的…” |
发表于 2006-1-31 12:48:54
