lhshaoxia 发表于 2011-2-23 07:04:39

美国大学生常见语法错误

网友Camden2002今天上午给我发来一篇英文文章,作者是美国一所大学的英语讲师,内容则是美国大学生常犯的十大语法错误(top ten grammar problems)。Camden2002网友建议我把这篇文章翻译出来,让国内的英语学习者看看,美国大学生常犯的这些错误,我们自己是否也常犯。这个建议非常好,不过我最近比较忙,各位的时间也很宝贵,所以我只把这十大语法错误的大意翻译出来,供各位参考一下。另外请注意:在下面的十组例句中,第一句是病句,第二句则是改正过来的句子。

  一、句子之间缺少过渡性的单词或词组

  ① Salmons swim upstream, they leap over huge dams to reach their destination.

  ② Salmons swim upstream, and then they leap over huge dams to reach their destination.

  二、省字号(')的滥用

  ① the government's plan

  ② the plan of the government

  三、代词之间的性、数、格不一致

  ① Everyone has their homework.

  ② Everyone has his (or her) homework.

  四、主句与从句的顺序不当

  ① Some of the new dot-com millionaires found out the party was over, after the NASDAQ value dropped by over two thirds.

  ② After the NASDAQ value dropped by over two thirds, some of the new dot-com millionaires found out the party was over.

  五、双重否定

  ① Barely no one noticed that the pop star lip-synched during the whole performance.

  ② Barely anyone noticed that the pop star lip-synched during the whole performance.

  六、修饰语、插入语的位置不当

  ① The forest fire, no longer held in check by the exhausted firefighters, jumped the firebreak.

  ② No longer held in check by the exhausted firefighters, the forest fire jumped the firebreak.

  七、意义含糊的先行词

  ① The band members collected his and her uniforms.

  ② The band members collected their uniforms.

  八、介词和冠词的滥用

  ① The project of the government reduces the costs of production of the private firms.

  ② The government project reduces the production costs of private firms.

  九、句子缺少成分

  ① When aiming for the highest returns, and also thinking about the possible losses.

  ② When aiming for the highest returns, investors also should think about the possible losses.

  十、忘记断句

  ① I do not recall what kind of printer it was all I remember is that it could sort, staple, and print a packet at the same time.

  ② I do not recall what kind of printer it was. All I remember is that it could sort, staple, and print a packet at the same time.

4545 发表于 2011-3-7 18:39:21

感谢

多一些实例就更好了

小兵 发表于 2011-3-7 20:09:29

美国大学生

注意:英语面试中常犯十大语法错误
http://www.examda.com/syyy/msyy/20090205/134038420.html

醉乡常客 发表于 2011-3-7 22:03:30

发帖常见错误——煞有介事乱转!

neotsu 发表于 2011-3-8 22:14:24

3. 鼓励用英语进行原创,对优秀的原创作品给予5~10财富评分或加威;对假冒原创的非原创帖子,将扣除5财富;

dmhsds 发表于 2011-3-29 12:56:03

感谢了!

很不错的东西!
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