明天要交的英语作业，高手帮忙修改一下
On Taiwan problemIt is undeniable that Taiwan is an indiscerptible part of china. But for historical reasons Taiwan has been separated from the mainland for nearly 60 years. Since the Democratic Progressive Party came into power in 2000 the situation became more and more complicated. In order to realize their personal purposes Taiwan secessionists advocate Taiwan independence from China and disturb the communication between the mainland and Taiwan. Their secession activities provoked extensive opposition. Some activists insist that we should launch a war to eliminate the Taiwan secessionists and settle Taiwan problem forever by military offensive. And there is a hearsay that the war between the mainland and Taiwan will happen soon.
But in my opinion, military offensive is the last resort we can use in resolving the Taiwan problem. Because war is not a good thing. It always brings many bad results. If the war breaks out everyone’s life will be changed dramatically. Men will be killed and Houses will be destroyed in the war. Unemployment, inflation, enocomic depression and all kinds of social problems will follow the war. As in the postwar Iraq every common citizen cann’t live a peaceful life as before. And the most important thing is that Chinese cann’t beat Chinese.
But what can we do to settle the Taiwan problem peacefully?
First of all, we can apply economic sanction against Taiwan secession. Nowadays our country’s reform and opening up policy has yielded substantial results. Taiwan economy becomes more and more dependent on the mainland. According to recently released statistic datas from Chinese commercial department, the mainland has become the largest trade partner, the largest origin of trade surplus and the largest investment destination of Taiwan. There are reports indicate that Taiwan economy will be beaten badly if the mainland applys economic sanction to it. Some Taiwan enterprises made pots of money in mainland and turn to support Taiwan secession. So economic sanction will be powerful in control Taiwan secession when used appropriately.
Secondly, we can restrict Taiwan secession through diplomatic efforts. The present Taiwan government of the democratic progressive party is do its best to seek international recognition of Taiwan independence. Ironically, along with the development of China less and less countrys would like to admit Taiwan’s independence. Only a few poor countrys in Africa still keep diplomatic relations with Taiwan for temporary benefits. So through effective diplomatic efforts we can narrow the range of Taiwan secession activity and reduce its influence.
Thirdly, if the Taiwan secession force loses control or the territory integrity of our country is aggressed we have no choice but to take up arms to protect our country. After all Taiwan government has bought large numbers of advanced weapons to increase its military forces. The current military forces of Taiwan is enough to threaten the peace and stability of southeast Asia. It is possible that Taiwan secessionists will bring our people into catastrophe by attacking important cities and constructions of the mainland such as the three gorges dam. So national defence is an important foudation in resolving the Taiwan problem. We need powful national defence to overawe the Taiwan secessionists.
In conclusion communication and unmilitary means is the best policy in resolving the Taiwan problem. We should go all out to avoid the war. But we cann’t be too optimistic also. We should prepare for the war even if we don’t need it. 马马虎虎，大概有大一、二水平。
套路掌握的不错，又是1、2、3 又是in conclusion的。
内容有些值得探讨，we can apply economic sanction against Taiwan secession？你胆子不小！！！And there is a hearsay that the war between the mainland and Taiwan will happen soon.
你要负责啊！
用词方面：大词不少，地道不够。less and less countrys？天，应该是fewer and fewer countries;
But we cann’t be too optimistic also。 cann't 是这样拼的吗？问题还不少，没空细改！
语法水平还算过关。
千万别以为写的很好，可以显摆。还有不小的进步空间，加油！ 非常感谢!
我可不敢有显摆的意思啊，自己的问题自己很难发现啊！
再一次感谢！
Thirdly, if the Taiwan secession force loses control or the territory integrity of our country is aggressed we have no choice but to take up arms to protect our country........
楼主不要说啥“高手”撒，这不是不让俺们低手发言嘛。
跳着看了一下，文体上可能太追求正式，语法上小有瑕疵，例如：
Thirdly, if the Taiwan secession force is out of control or the territory integrity of our country is under threat， we have no choice but to take up arms to protect our country.
lose control 指失去对他人他物的控制，而不是自己过于膨胀以致失控；
查一般的小字典，还没发现aggress作动词这样用的：） 怎么想到去写政治问题？
尤其是台湾跟大陆？ 谢谢指正!
政治老师叫写了台湾问题
比较熟悉了
所以外教的课也写了这个主题
晕
老外居然怀疑我是从网上copy的 indiscerptible => Inalienable In conclusion communication and unmilitary means is the best policy in resolving the Taiwan problem.
不太通：...means is ... policy But we cann’t be too optimistic also.
这是汉语用法，英语里这里没有用also的。建议多看阅读资料，多背范文。
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