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高职院校物理教学中创新教育的研究摘要：在这项研究中，笔者从各种途径中培养学生的创新能力，首选培养学生的创新思维和创新意识，突破原有思维定势，以克服惯性思维的局限性。再采取有力措施指导学生学习创新的技法，探索发散型、集中型、组合型、逆向型创造技法等各种发明方法和技巧，改进课堂教学，营造创新氛围，设计有利于启发学生创新的教学内容，并注重教学内容的趣味性和实用性。
根据教学需要发动学生自制教具，针对已有教具存在的不足之处，采用新思路改进结构，完善功能，提高实验效果，不断把新技术引入教学之中。改进原有实验方式，把验证性实验变为探索性实验。充分利用高职院校学生实践能力较强的优势，引导学生创造性地解决生产和生活中的实际问题。积极开展研究性学习，以问题为载体和纽带，让学生进行自主学习和合作学习，引导学习大胆讨论，取长补短，使他们亲身感悟现代科技的产生和发展过程，以培养他们的创新能力，我们还探索在评价机制上做出相应的改革，使学生们感到只有按照创新的观点和思路去学习和探索，才能获得优良的成绩，以得到学校和社会的认可。并在此研究基础上建立了“发现并提出问题―――探索解决方法―――学习所需的新知识―――创造性的解决问题―――得出初步结论―――通过交流与评价―――形成新结论”的教学模式。
这项研究成果将为高职院的教育教学提供新颖的授课方式，改变“课记笔记，考试背笔记“的陈腐教学方法，摒弃学生学习知识的惟一衡量标准，消除高职学生低于本科生一等的自卑心理，充分调动学生的学习积极性，变”要我学“为“我要学”，真正把教育教学重心放在培养学生创新精神和实践能力上，以增厚知识底蕴，打牢创新基础，施展创新才华，建立高职学生独有的能力结构，使高职教育不再是低层次的教育，而是与本科并驾齐驱，同样重要的应用技术教育，以充分发挥出它在培养高技能人才方面的独特作用。
Abstract: In this research, the author cultivated students’ innovative ability in many ways. Students’ innovative thinking and innovative consciousness were cultivated at first. Break through original thinking formula; overcome the limitation of inertial thinking. Take effective measure to instruct students to learn skills for innovating, explore divergent innovating skills, concentrated innovating skills, combinatorial innovating skills and reversal innovative skills of different kinds of innovating methods and skills. Improve classroom teaching, create innovative atmosphere, and design teaching materials that easy to develop students’ innovation, pay attention to the interest and practicability of the teaching content. Led students to make teaching aids by themselves according to the need of teaching, improve the structure of teaching aids, perfect the functions according to the want, increasing the effectiveness of experiments. Bring new techs to teaching constantly. Improve original experiment mode, vary the experiments from experimental type to explorative type. Make full use of high vocational college-students’ high practical ability, led them to solve problems in production and living creatively. Launch research-based learning actively, take problems as carriers and ties, led students to study voluntarily and cooperatively. Led them to discuss with others openly, learn from others and appreciate the initiation and development of modern techniques in person. Cultivate their innovating ability. We also explored the respective reform on evaluation system, to make students feel that, only studying and exploring through innovative opinion and thinking ways, can they acquire good remarks and the approval of the college and society. The teaching model of “discovering and putting forward problems-exploring countermeasures-learning new knowledge needed-solving problems creatively-draw conclusions” is established base on those methods mentioned above. This research will provide novel talents-training style for teaching in high vocation-technical college, change the old teaching method of writing down notes during the classes and reciting the notes before finals, abandon the only standard for evaluating the learning of students, eliminate the students’ inferior feeling when compared with undergraduate students, mobilize the students to learn. Make them eager to learn, instead of formerly asked to learn. Then the students accumulate not only knowledge, but also sound foundation for innovation. It is useful for them to exert their capacity to innovate. Unique ability structure of the high vocation-technical college students will develop through these methods. The high vocation-technical college education is not low-level education anymore; it is education of applied technology as important as undergraduate education. It will show its unique importance in training high-skilled, innovating talents.
Key words: innovative education; physics teaching; high vocation-technical college 翻译的感觉还不错，不过“，”加的有点问题 愿闻其详 1.“ thinking formula”是否应改为“ thinking habits”?
2“ Break through original thinking formula; overcome the limitation of inertial thinking. ”不构成句子，应与前句.“Students’ innovative thinking and innovative consciousness were cultivated at first.”衔接起来。
3.“Take effective measure ”中的“measure”应为复数。 [直接把改过的贴出来，中文和英语都改了。隔行如隔山，专业的东西也说不出什么意见。对摘要的撰写简单说下：一是关键词一定要在摘要的文字中出现；二是中文摘要和英文摘要其实不必互译，而是写好一个，再另写一个，很多人都以为互译容易，其实另写更好，互译很难逃掉中式英语的干扰；三是英文摘要以体现英语特点为好，如被动态的运用，可以使表达简洁方便，还有时态，一般现在时多用。
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高职院校物理教学中创新教育的研究
摘要：此项研究为高职高专物理教学中的创新教育，旨在通过各种途径培养学生的创新能力。首先发展其创新思维，培养其创新意识，突破思维定势，以克服惯性思维的局限性。再采取措施指导学生学习创新技法，探索发散型、集中型、组合型、逆向型等各种发明方法和技巧。主要通过四种途径进行。一是改进课堂教学，营造创新氛围。设计有利于启发学生创新的教学内容，并注重教学内容的趣味性和实用性。二是根据教学需要发动学生自制教具。针对已有教具存在的不足之处，采用新思路改进结构，完善功能，提高实验效果，不断把新技术引入教学之中。三是改进实验方式。把验证性实验变为探索性实验。充分利用高职院校学生实践能力较强的优势，引导学生创造性地解决生产和生活中的实际问题。四是积极开展研究性学习，以问题为载体和纽带，让学生进行自主学习和合作学习，引导学习大胆讨论，取长补短，使他们亲身感悟现代科技的产生和发展过程。同时，我们还探索在评价机制上进行相应改革，使学生们感到只有按照创新的观点和思路去学习和探索，才能获得优良的成绩，得到学校和社会的认可。在这些研究的基础上，建立了“发现并提出问题—探索解决方法—学习所需的新知识—创造性的解决问题—得出初步结论—通过交流与评价—形成新结论”的教学模式。
该研究成果将为高职院校提供新的授课方式，改进教学方法，摒弃以考试为惟一衡量标准的做法，消除高职学生的自卑心理，充分调动学习积极性，变”要我学“为“我要学”。真正把教育教学重心放在培养创新精神和实践能力上，以增厚知识底蕴，打牢创新基础，施展创新才华，建立高职学生独有的能力结构，使高职教育不再是低层次的教育，而是与本科并驾齐驱，同样重要的应用技术教育，以充分发挥出它在培养高级技能人才方面的独特作用。
关键词：创新教育；物理教学；高职院校
Abstract: This research is to explore the innovative education in physics teaching in high vocation-technical college, aiming at cultivating students’ ability of innovation through several approaches. First of all, students’ innovative thinking and consciousness are cultivated via breaking through original thinking formula, and overcoming the limitation of fossilized thinking. Then, effective measures are applied to instruct students to learn different kinds of innovating method and skill, which are respectively exploring-divergent, concentrated, combinatorial, and reversal skills. Mainly, four approaches are adopted. The first one is to improve classroom teaching, create innovative atmosphere, and design teaching materials that is helpful to develop students’ innovation, paying attention to the interest and practicability of the teaching content. The second one is to encourage students to make teaching aids by themselves according to the need of teaching, improve the structure of teaching aids, and perfect the functions according to the want, so as to increase the effectiveness of experiments. New techs are brought to classroom constantly. The third is to improve experiment mode, vary from experimental type to explorative type. Students’ high practical ability is made full use, solving problems in production and living creatively. The fourth one is to do research-based learning actively, taking problems as carriers and ties, making students study voluntarily and cooperatively, discuss with others openly, and learn from others and appreciate the initiation and development of modern techniques in person. Meanwhile, we explore the respective reform on evaluation system, to make students feel that, only studying and exploring through innovative opinion and thinking, can they acquire good remarks and the approval of the college and society. The new teaching model of “discovering and putting forward problems - exploring countermeasures - learning new knowledge needed - solving problems creatively - draw conclusions” is established based on the achievement of this research.
This research will provide novel talents-training style for teaching in high vocation-technical college, change the old teaching method of writing down notes during the classes and reciting the notes before finals, abandon the only standard for evaluating the learning of students, eliminate the students’ inferior feeling when compared with undergraduate students, and mobilize the students to learn willingly, instead of to learn compulsorily. Then the students accumulate not only knowledge, but also sound foundation for innovation. It is useful for them to exert their capacity to innovate. Unique ability structure of the high vocation-technical college students will develop through these methods. Thus, the high vocation-technical college education is proved not to be low-level education anymore; it is education of applied technology as important as undergraduate education. It will show its unique importance in training high-skilled, innovatory talents.
Key words: innovative education; physics teaching; high vocation-technical college
楼上意见都很好，只是关于被动语态，似乎还是越少用越好的 呵呵，感觉这次的文章的错误比前几次的错误多，而且有的错误很明显，好象和前几次的文章不是一个人写的。
1、Take effective measure to instruct students to learn skills for innovating, explore divergent innovating skills, concentrated innovating skills,
combinatorial innovating skills and reversal innovative skills of different kinds of innovating methods and skills.
a)skill in/at
He was valued for his skill in raising money for the company.
b)此句无主语
c)最后的of different kinds of innovating methods and skills不知是修饰哪一个成份。建议将different kinds of innovating methods and skills改成同位语。
最后，建议此句改成：
Taking effective measure to instruct students to learn skills at innovating/innovative skills, we explored divergent, concentrated, combinatorial, reversal skills and so on, different kinds of innovating methods and skills.
2、Improve classroom teaching, create innovative atmosphere, and design teaching materials that easy to develop students’ innovation, pay attention to the interest and practicability of the teaching content.
a)此句无主语。不知为什么，这篇文章有大量的谓语动词并列。
b)atmosphere作气氛的意思时，是单数可数名词，所以其前面要加不定冠词an。
c)easy前要有系动词。
d)觉得这里的"启发"用edify较好。
e)content应为contents 这个摘要太长了，我删了一些很虚的东西。特别是“这项研究成果将为高职院的教育教学提供新颖的授课方式，改变“课记笔记，考试背笔记“的陈腐教学方法，摒弃学生学习知识的惟一衡量标准，消除高职学生低于本科生一等的自卑心理，充分调动学生的学习积极性，变”要我学“为“我要学”，真正把教育教学重心放在培养学生创新精神和实践能力上，以增厚知识底蕴，打牢创新基础，施展创新才华，建立高职学生独有的能力结构，使高职教育不再是低层次的教育，而是与本科并驾齐驱，同样重要的应用技术教育，以充分发挥出它在培养高技能人才方面的独特作用。”这段话应该在文章的结论中出现，没有必要在摘要中显示！修改后高职院校物理教学中创新教育的研究
摘要：在这项研究中，笔者从各种途径中培养学生的创新能力，首选培养学生的创新思维和创新意识，突破原有思维定势，以克服惯性思维的局限性。再采取有力措施指导学生学习创新的技法，探索发散型、集中型、组合型、逆向型创造技法等各种发明方法和技巧，改进课堂教学，营造创新氛围，设计有利于启发学生创新的教学内容，并注重教学内容的趣味性和实用性。根据教学需要发动学生自制教具，不断把新技术引入教学之中。改进原有实验方式，把验证性实验变为探索性实验。引导学生创造性地解决生产和生活中的实际问题。积极开展研究性学习，以问题为载体和纽带，让学生进行自主学习和合作学习，引导学习大胆讨论，以培养他们的创新能力，我们还探索在评价机制上做出相应的改革，使学生们感到只有按照创新的观点和思路去学习和探索，才能获得优良的成绩，以得到学校和社会的认可。并在此研究基础上建立了“发现并提出问题―――探索解决方法―――学习所需的新知识―――创造性的解决问题―――得出初步结论―――通过交流与评价―――形成新结论”的教学模式。 1. 并在此研究基础上建立了“发现并提出问题―――探索解决方法―――学习所需的新知识―――创造性的解决问题―――得出初步结论―――通过交流与评价―――形成新结论”的教学模式。
我觉得这个教学模式的翻译采用动名词和名词的形式比较好些，例如，“question discovering and raising--- solution exploring--- knowledge learning--- problem solving--- conclusion reaching --- communication and evaluation--- conclusion drawing”。
2. 使高职教育不再是低层次的教育，而是与本科并驾齐驱，同样重要的应用技术教育，以充分发挥出它在培养高技能人才方面的独特作用。
The high vocation-technical education is not low-level education, but an important education of applied technology as undergraduate’s, which shows its unique function in cultivating high-skilled, innovating talents.
3. 关键词：创新教育， 物理教学， 高等职业技术院校
4. 摘要英语译文的一些句子可以采用从句的形式使文章显得更加连贯严谨。 大家继续讨论吧,这个中文稿子是我们领导写的,我只负责翻译,呵呵,译得不好,希望能够起到抛砖引玉的作用. 我来提几点意见，仅供参考：
●如下一句，应在最后一个动作“mobilize”前加and.
This research will provide novel talents-training style for teaching in high vocation-technical college, change the old teaching method of writing down notes during the classes and reciting the notes before finals, abandon the only standard for evaluating the learning of students, eliminate the students’ inferior feeling when compared with undergraduate students, mobilize the students to learn.
●如下一句，应在句前加上主语“This research”
Make them eager to learn, instead of formerly asked to learn.
●如下一句，应在“accumulate”前加上will
Then the students accumulate not only knowledge, but also sound foundation for innovation.
●如下一句中的“develop”恐怕要改用被动“be developed”。
Unique ability structure of the high vocation-technical college students will develop through these methods.
●如下句子宜改用“not...anymore, but ... instead”结构
The high vocation-technical college education is not low-level education anymore; it is education of applied technology as important as undergraduate education. Abstract: In this research, the author cultivated students’ innovative ability in many ways. Students’ innovative thinking and innovative consciousness were cultivated at first. Break through original thinking formula; overcome the limitation of inertial thinking
根据原中文作以下更改，觉得更合原意且无英文表达的弊病：The most important is to cultivate students’ innovative thinking and consciousness, and to break though the old thinking models.
文中“原有”一词不能用“original”来翻。“Original”多表“原创、起源”之意。我我觉得用“old”一词更能表达词意。另“思维定势”大都用“model”一词来表达。
Take effective measure to instruct students to learn skills for innovating, explore divergent innovating skills, concentrated innovating skills, combinatorial innovating skills and reversal innovative skills of different kinds of innovating methods and skills.
此句应用被动语态：Effective measures were taken to instruct students to learn skills for innovating, and to explore divergent innovating skills, ….
Improve classroom teaching, create innovative atmosphere, and design teaching materials that easy to develop students’ innovation, pay attention to the interest and practicability of the teaching content.
可否作以下更改较妥：We try to improve classroom teaching, to create innovating atmosphere and to design teaching materials that easy to develpo students’ innovation. At same time(句子与句之间要注意连词的使用), we pay much attention to the amusement and practicability of teaching content.
Led students to make teaching aids by themselves according to the need of teaching, improve the structure of teaching aids, perfect the functions according to the want, increasing the effectiveness of experiments.
更改：We guide students to make teaching aids by themselves according to the need of teaching, and bring new techs to teaching constantly in order to improve the stucture of teaching aids, perfect the functions and increase the effectiveness of experiments.
. Improve original experiment mode, vary the experiments from experimental type to explorative type.
更改：We shift old experimental model to explorative model.
Make full use of high vocational college-students’ high practical ability, led them to solve problems in production and living creatively.
更改：Making full use of high vocational college students’ strong practical ability, we led them to solve problems in production and living.采用分词短语的形式使句子和句子间结构更紧密
关于此翻译我有以下建议，但本人才疏学浅，不对之处大家共同讨论。
1、语态问题：我接触科技论文比较多，其摘要里大多使用被动语态。楼主则用了很多主动语态，这未尝不可。但很多是没有主语的语句，这一用法是否能被英语语法所认可？
2、摘要内容：当看到中文摘要时，我就感到有些头昏—字数好多！科技论文中摘要字数绝不可有这多的。当然我不知道关于教育方法的论文摘要是怎样一个标准？很佩服楼主能把这么长的摘要翻译得这好，的确不简单！但我觉得翻译成英文时，不一定要一句句对照翻译过来，把主要的意思表达出来就行了。因为有些中文句子硬要把它翻译成英文时，老外一定看不懂—当然我们是看得懂的（中式英语嘛）。
3、词的使用：使用正确合理的英文单词来表达中文是很难的。你所选择的单词既要表达出中文意思又要符合英语表达习惯，这的确要花很多的时间去学习。 凑凑热闹。对于科技论文的英文摘要一般应以被动句为主。但这也有区分，如果是实验性的论文则须多用被动句，但对于像本文的关于教学方法的探讨，则可以以主动句为主。具体视情况而定。
楼主的这篇文章摘要，汉语确有赘述之处，本人也是搞教育的，对次也略有所知，提出自己的修改意见和大家相互切磋。
把汉语改了一下，又翻译了一下。最后一段关于这项研究的作用，感觉太琐细，就改的多了一点。哈哈，个人意见，多多赐教！
摘要：在这项研究中，笔者从各种途径中（试图通过各种途径来）培养学生的创新能力。首选（首先，重要的是）培养学生的创新思维和创新意识，突破原有思维定势，以克服惯性思维的局限性。再（再次[/size]）采取有力措施指导学生学习创新的技法，探索发散型、集中型、组合型、逆向型创造技法等各种发明方法和技巧，改进课堂教学，营造创新氛围，设计有利于启发学生创新的教学内容，并注重教学内容的趣味性和实用性。
In this paper, the author tried many ways to cultivate students’ innovative ability. Firstly, it’s important to cultivate the students’ innovative thinking and innovative consciousness and break through the original thinking formula in order to conquer the limitation of inertial thinking. Secondly, we endeavored to take great measures to give some directions to the students to learn the innovative skills, explore many innovative thinking methods such as divergent thinking, concentrative thinking, combinatorial thinking, reversal thinking and so on, improve the classroom teaching, create innovative atmosphere, design teaching materials which can inspire the students’ innovative abilities and focus on the interests and practicability of teaching content.
根据教学需要发动（鼓励）学生自制教具；针对已有（现有）教具存在的不足之处，采用新思路来改进结构，完善功能，提高实验效果，不断把新技术引入教学之中。改进原有实验方式，把验证性实验变为探索性实验。充分利用高职院校学生实践能力较强的优势，引导学生创造性地解决生产和生活中的实际问题。积极开展研究性学习，以问题为载体和纽带，让学生进行自主学习和合作学习；引导学习大胆讨论，取长补短，使他们亲身感悟现代科技的产生和发展过程，以培养他们的创新能力。我们还探索在评价机制上做出相应的改革，使学生们感到只有按照创新的观点和思路去学习和探索，才能获得优良的成绩，以得到学校和社会的认可。在此研究基础上建立了“发现并提出问题―――探索解决方法―――学习所需的新知识―――创造性的解决问题―――得出初步结论―――通过交流与评价―――形成新结论”的教学模式。
We also encouraged the students to make teaching aids based on the teaching needs, take innovative approaches to improve the structures of the teaching aids and perfect their functions in order to enhance the effectiveness of the experiments and adopt the new techniques into teaching, improve the old experimental modes and transform them from validating ones into explorative ones. Taking great advantage of high vocational college-students’ high practical ability, we piloted the students to deal with the practical problems creatively in their living and producing process, launched research-based learning projects and take questions as ties and carriers so as to encourage autonomous learning and cooperative learning, permit the students to discuss freely and fearlessly and learn from others' strong points to offset one's weakness in order to make them feel the evolutional process of the modern technology and cultivate their innovative abilities. We also explored to transform the evolutional system correspondingly so as to make the students realize that they can make great success and get the reception of the school and society only to study and explore through innovative thinking and ways. Basing on the research we build up a teaching mode which is discovering and putting forward question—exploring the keys to the question—acquiring the necessary new knowledge—solving the question creatively—drawing the initial conclusion—discussing and evaluating this output—reconstruct a new idea.
这项研究成果将为高职院的教育提供借鉴。它可以为教学提供新颖的授课方式，改变陈腐教学方法，摈弃以衡量知识为唯一标准的评估方式，提高学生学习的自信心，激发学习的兴趣，充分调动学生的学习积极性。我们应该真正把教育教学重心放在培养学生创新精神和实践能力上，以增厚知识底蕴，打牢创新基础，施展创新才华，建立高职学生独有的能力结构，以充分发挥出高职学院在培养高技能人才方面的独特作用。
This research will be expected to provide useful implications for the education in high vocation-technical college. It may be helpful to provide the teaching with new modes, change the old-fashion teaching methods, and eliminate the evaluative system which only based on the knowledge criterion. It can also enhance the students’ self-esteem; evoke their learning interests, learning enthusiasm extensively. We should put our teaching emphasis on the cultivation of the students’ innovative spirit and practical abilities, make them accumulate their knowledge, reinforce their innovative foundation and eventually show the unique importance in training high-skilled, innovating talent for the high vocation-technical college. Abstract: In this research, the author cultivated students’ innovative ability in many ways. Students’ innovative thinking and innovative consciousness were cultivated at first. Break through original thinking formula;
讨论一下“突破原有思维定势”的译法。
1、觉得这里的"原有"可以不翻译，要”打破“的，当然是”原有“的。
2、思维定势
thinking set
stereotyped thinking pattern
a pattern of thinking
a traditional way of thinking
confined thinking
regular thinking
其中thinking set用地人较多。
不过，下面这篇文章是这么译的:
浅谈初中物理教学中如何打破思维定势
A discussion on how to break the set habit of thinking in middle school physics teaching
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3、break和break through
break 作“打破”的意思时，为disobey意思。如：break the rule打破规则
而break through 作“突破”的意思时，为penetrat意思。如：Demonstrators broke through the police cordon. 示威群众突破了警戒线.
所以，觉得上面这篇文章的翻译还是比较好的。
但是，思维定势是用“thinking set”还是“the set habit of thinking”，觉得都有点中国式英语的味道，不知道地道的英语怎么说，希望有高手能回答。 引用第5楼resonance于2007-07-07 00:19发表的 :
楼上意见都很好，只是关于被动语态，似乎还是越少用越好的
个人感觉，科技文章里，特别是摘要里被动语态的使用是不可避免的，而笔者（The author）等代词是要避免出现的。而且在摘要里，长句也不可避免。 既然版主将摘要和译文贴出来让大家讨论，我想版主一定不会介意直言不讳的意见吧。坦率地说，这篇摘要汉语和英语都不太好，汉语且不作评论，单说英语，里面时态、词汇和句子结构方面的问题太多。
先说大的方面，主要是时态和句子结构。
译者一开始就用了两个过去时，cultivated, were cultivated. 这里和过去毫不相关。在摘要和评论中，作者研究了什么，持什么观点，都要用现在时，这一点，如有疑问，有大量的native speaker所写的英文摘要作为参照。
其次，在句子结构上，译者用了大量的“无主句”。“无主句”在汉语中司空见惯，但在英语中却是严重的语法错误。在英语正式文体中，可以省略主语的只有一种情况，那就是祈使句。使用无主句，给人的感觉就是祈使句，是口号。汉译英中一个很重要的转换就是要把汉语中无主句的主语找出来并且在英语中表达出来。以下是摘要中出现的无主句：
Break through original thinking formula; overcome the limitation of inertial thinking.
Take effective measure to instruct students to learn skills for innovating, explore divergent innovating skills, concentrated innovating skills, combinatorial innovating skills and reversal innovative skills of different kinds of innovating methods and skills.
Improve classroom teaching, create innovative atmosphere, and design teaching materials that easy to develop students’ innovation, pay attention to the interest and practicability of the teaching content.
Led students to make teaching aids by themselves according to the need of teaching, improve the structure of teaching aids, perfect the functions according to the want, increasing the effectiveness of experiments.
Bring new techs to teaching constantly.
Improve original experiment mode, vary the experiments from experimental type to explorative type.
Make full use of high vocational college-students’ high practical ability, led them to solve problems in production and living creatively.
Launch research-based learning actively, take problems as carriers and ties, led students to study voluntarily and cooperatively.
Led them to discuss with others openly, learn from others and appreciate the initiation and development of modern techniques in person.
Cultivate their innovating ability.
Make them eager to learn, instead of formerly asked to learn.
这么多无主句罗列在一起，不光是句子结构有问题，同时还造成了意义的费解以及句子之间连贯性的缺乏。
下面我再谈用词问题
1.高职院校：不是high vocation-technical college,应为advanced vocational college；如果用high，也只能使用higher
2.笔者从各种途径中培养学生的创新能力: 这里不是作者去“培养”学生的能力，而是作者研究如何从从各种途径中培养学生的创新能力，原文的模糊导致了英文翻译的错误， 因此，the author cultivated students’ innovative ability in many ways，应改为the author focuses on various ways of cultivating the students’ innovative ability.
3.首选 是指首要任务，因此可以译成：The first choice is to或者It is the first choice to 或者The first important task is to...
4.突破原有思维定势 Break through original thinking formula这里的突破就是打破的意思，break就可以，加上through反而多余，因为through表示的是要穿过一个立体的东西，如突破敌人的防线。“原有”译为original，更是南辕北辙，original本意是有独创性的，和思维定势格格不入。这里直接译成break their sterotyped thinking即可，或者break them out of their habit-bound thinking.
5.探索发散型、集中型、组合型、逆向型创造技法等各种发明方法和技巧: explore divergent innovating skills, concentrated innovating skills, combinatorial innovating skills and reversal innovative skills of different kinds of innovating methods and skills. 这么多innovating skills读起来拖泥带水，冗长沉闷，建议改成：explore innovative methods and skills such as divergent, concentrated, combinatorial and reversal thinking.
6.设计有利于启发学生创新的教学内容：and design teaching materials that easy to develop students’ innovation, easy前面少个are,但即使加上are也是错误的，应说it is easy to do sth,而不是the materials are easy to...
启发学生创新也不是develop students’ innovation，属于搭配问题，develop应和ability连用。
这句最好译成：design teaching materials which may stimulate/help/benefit the students' innovative thinking.
7.并注重教学内容的趣味性和实用性 pay attention to the interest and practicability of the teaching content，interest 这里使用不当，应改为 and make the teaching content both interesting and practical.
综上所述，第一段改译如下：
This research focuses on various ways of cultivating the students' innovative ability. It first concentrates on cultivating the students' innovative thinking and consciousness of innovation, and breaking them out of their habbit-bound thinking, so as to overcome the limitation of their inertial thinking. Then it deals with effective measures to instruct students to learn skills for innovation, and explores innovative methods and skills such as divergent, concentrated, combinatorial and reversal thinking, in hope to improve classroom teaching and create an innovative atmosphere. It also emphasizes designing teaching materials to stimulate/help/benefit the students' innovative thinking and making the teaching content both interesting and practical.
该睡觉了，暂且改到这里吧。不当之处，还望版主和各位批评指正。 1、Abstract: In this research, the author cultivated students’ innovative ability in many ways.中in many ways.是否改为by many ways更合适
2、perfect the functions according to the want, increasing the effectiveness of experiments.改为
3、Bring new techs to teaching constantly.中的to改为in可能更合适
4、to make students feel that, only studying and exploring through innovative opinion and thinking ways,中的through改为by更合适
5、can they acquire good remarks and the approval of the college and society.中的acquire改为have 是否更好
6、The teaching model of “discovering and putting forward problems-exploring countermeasures-learning new knowledge needed-solving problems creatively-draw conclusions” is established base on those methods mentioned above.中draw conclusions少了new；those methods改为this research
7、reciting the notes before finals 改为review the notes before finals examination 我个人认为：这边文章翻译的中国味很浓，很多是直译，并没有从英语习惯的角度去翻译，如果让一个纯正的英国人或美国人来看的话，会觉得很涩，有些难懂，因为不符合他们的英语组织习惯。下面我具体说明下，当然我本人英语水平有限，对英语背景不是很了解，很多问题自己解决的不是很好，希望大家能够指出校正，大家共同讨论学习进步，共同提高我们的英语翻译水平。
“通过各种途径”用"in many ways"比较合适，楼上的建议"by many ways"，我认为影响不大，这两个介词在这里区分没有必要。
关于思维定势不多说了，这里犯的毛病就是汉直译英，没有考虑英语搭配。
楼上的也提到了关于句式的翻译，在这里不过多阐述，只是我们大家以后翻译时要注意调整好语序，要尽量符合英语模式，不要按照中文习惯直译，这样读起来很涩。
逆向型创造技巧可以翻译为"backward innovating skills",backward：反向的。
在这里的“探索”翻译为"explore"感觉不太合适，用"probe into/grobe for"更合适些。
关于“再采取有力措施指导学生学习创新的技法，探索发散型、集中型、组合型、逆向型创造技法等各种发明方法和技巧，改进课堂教学，营造创新氛围，设计有利于启发学生创新的教学内容，并注重教学内容的趣味性和实用性”的翻译有很多错误，比如在英语中，“指导”，“探索”，“改进”,“设计”和“注重”是并列的动词，要是用在一个句子中要注意格式统一，如果拆分成几个句子要主要句子间连接。将原文翻译中，改为一个句子：Further more, effective measures will be taken to instruct students to learn skills for innovating, to probe into divergent, concentrated, combinatorial and reversal innovating skills of various innovating methods and skills, to improve classroom teaching, to create innovative atmosphere, to design new teaching materials that make for developing students' innovation, and to pay attention to the interest and practicability of the teaching content.
“根据教学需要发动学生自制教具，针对已有教具存在的不足之处，采用新思路改进结构，完善功能，提高实验效果，不断把新技术引入教学之中”的翻译也存在很多问题，句子连接不好，一些words的滥用。let sb do sth，而不是“Led students to make”后面的还有"led students to study"；应该将"improve the structure of teaching aids, perfect the functions according to the want"改为"improve the structure and perfect the functions of teaching aids in allusion to the shortcomings that exist in the teaching aids".
“改进原有实验方式，把验证性实验变为探索性实验”应该翻译为"improving the original experiment mode to change the validating experiment type into explorative type".该文中很多这样直译的，不注重语法和句子的连接，后面类似不在说明。
变”要我学“为“我要学 翻译为 Make them eager to learn, instead of being formerly forced to learn.
“施展创新才华”翻译为 These are useful for them to put their capacity of innovation good use.
文中的“真正把教育教学重心放在培养学生创新精神和实践能力上”没有翻译
“使高职教育不再是低层次的教育，而是与本科并驾齐驱，同样重要的应用技术教育，以充分发挥出它在培养高技能人才方面的独特作用”The high vocation-technical college education is not low-level education anymore (后添by these methods）; it is an education of appling technology as important as undergraduate education. It will show its unique importance in training high-skilled, innovating talents的意思与原文有所歧义，“使”一定要翻译出来，意思通过这些方法，高职教育才会更好地发挥作用。要突出这些方法的作用，这是关键。
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