有花堪折
与女友分手的时候，无奈写下的一句有花堪折直须折,莫待无花空折枝
试着翻译：When it's floriferous time, there's a need to pick the flower before it's too late;do not wait until we can only break a few branches.
请指教 和这首诗的感觉类似？
To the Virgins, to make much of Time
Robert Herrick. 1591–1674
GATHER ye rosebuds while ye may,
Old Time is still a-flying:
And this same flower that smiles to-day
To-morrow will be dying.
The glorious lamp of heaven, the sun,
The higher he 's a-getting,
The sooner will his race be run,
And nearer he 's to setting.
That age is best which is the first,
When youth and blood are warmer;
But being spent, the worse, and worst
Times still succeed the former.
Then be not coy, but use your time,
And while ye may, go marry:
For having lost but once your prime,
You may for ever tarry.
楼主应该写前两句
劝君莫惜金缕衣，
劝君惜取少年时 要追女孩子，看准了就大气点，直接点。
我觉得应该这样说。
I will never miss. 如果把will 去掉，我觉得语气就更强了。
顺便问一句，楼主今年青春几何，可有对象？ 引用第2楼agldacheng于2007-06-23 21:28发表的 :
要追女孩子，看准了就大气点，直接点。
我觉得应该这样说。
I will never miss.
I'm scared
If I said "I will never miss", the Miss would say "Get away PLEASE"! 引用第3楼agldacheng于2007-06-23 21:29发表的 :
如果把will 去掉，我觉得语气就更强了。
顺便问一句，楼主今年青春几何，可有对象？
版主要作媒不成？我先挂个号
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