myfmyf 发表于 2004-7-27 14:07:45

【原创】个人英文小诗一首：Decision

Decision

I walked along the country road
Hurriedly to another place.
I was looking for a familiar face,
To see whether you were still one in the cold.

On the banks of the river,
We sat side by side on a stone
Appreciating the beauty belonging to us alone.
I hope it will last for ever.

The water changes with the seasons,
Enen though I am not sure
Whether this harmony can endure
I still hope to stay with you without any reasons!



为了配合咱们文学原创“我手与我心”的征文，活跃一下气氛，特写这首诗和大家共消遣！


望多多指教！

爱好创作的朋友不妨到外语学习上显示一下你的英文文笔！^_^

zzxx 发表于 2004-7-27 14:54:33

支持楼主，文学原创应该很赞成用英语写的侍。楼主在外语版的那首诗我更欣赏的哟！

zhuce2003 发表于 2004-7-27 17:58:48

I still hope to stay with you without any reasons!

myfmyf 发表于 2004-7-27 19:14:39

下面是引用bily于2004-07-27 6:08 PM发表的 :
stay


Thank you for yourcorrection.

hazeleyes 发表于 2004-7-27 19:33:41

Enen though I am not sure

Enen? Even?

hazeleyes 发表于 2004-7-27 19:34:35

OOHH~~,DON'T MAKE YOUR DECISION IN SUCH A RUSH~~~

bmulb2002 发表于 2004-8-2 17:13:46

nothing can last for a life long

quick 发表于 2004-8-2 22:32:17

Only love is forever !
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