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The Huang-Pu River flows from south to north dividing Shanghai into two parts. Pudong is called so because it is on the east side of Huang-Pu River. In 1920s along with the establishment of financial and commercial areas with the bund at the core, foreign investors as well as national capitalists began to expand their economic activities in Pudong. The economic development of Pudong was badly affected because of the Huang-Pu River. There was a striking contrast between the two sides of the Huang-Pu River. On the one side were ten li of prosperous business area while on the other side were vast stretches of faming land.
Since 1990 when the Chinese Central Committee proclaimed the policy of reform and opening up to the outside world, Pudong has made rapid progress with each passing day. Pudong is stepping into the new century in a brand-new image with the skyscrapers built up like mushrooms after spring shower and rural scenery and modern architecture enhancing each other’s splendor.
本期翻译作品提交截止，欢迎大家继续跟贴讨论。
引用第101楼montana于2006-06-14 09:01发表的“”:
本期翻译作品提交截止，欢迎大家继续跟贴讨论。
既然斑竹欢迎，我们也不妨讨论讨论。其实，也许大家和我一样，觉得翻译本是很个性化的事，不同的人对作品的理解不同，言语方式又各有千秋。于是，各种版本的译文也就各有各的道理，即便有些理解上的失误也是不值得大惊小怪的，而讨论译文优劣往往是说不清道不明。所以，我建议我们不妨就针对自己的译文，把自己翻译时的思路和考虑说出来，交流交流思想，一方面，听听大家的意见、建议，另一方面，也许能对大家有所启发。下面，我来抛砖引玉。
译文在篇章结构和句法结构等方面作了如下调整：
1、段落结构上，两段的第一句我们都用“浦东”开头，作主语（而不用黄浦江）。因为，文章的中心是浦东。浦东是什么？因何而得名？二三十年代怎么样？现在怎么样？
2、句法结构上，我们使用了三个后置“定语从句”，将顺承的因果关系转变成顺便提及的解释关系，使重点更加突出；我们使用了名词词组、分词等形式将句子转换成短语或词组，实现其静态、结果性意义，或弱化其动词性。
3、单词使用上，...
欢迎大家继续。
Huangpu river through across the south and north of shanghai and splits it into two parts.Pudong is named of its location in east side of huangpu river. In 1920-30's, with the formation of the core for finance and trade, foreign and local capitalists extend their economicactivity into pudong area. At the same time,because of the obstructiveness of huangpu river, the economic developement of pudong has been lagged mostly. The contrast of the two banks ofhuangpu river is so vivid that when one side is the mostly flourishing trade market,another side is still large farmland full of crop.Since the central government announce the oenp of pudong area from 1990, the development of new pudong has obtained great changes.The high buildings and large mansions stand up fast likebamboo shoots after a spring rain. The rurality and the modern building enhance each other bueaty enough. Pudong is stepping into new century with a whole new appearance.
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其实学外语不翻译最好了，作为非母语的东西再翻译往往会变得很难看
除非对两种语言都有很深的造诣，并且对所翻译的对象有很深的理解，才能做到互相的融合转换
当然偶尔这样的练习也可以帮助我们顺便揪出一些语法错误
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The Huangpu River, running across from South to North, divides Shanghai into two parts. Pudong won its fame because it is located to the east of Huangpu River. During 1920s to 1930s, with the setup of the financial and commercial region centered by Waitan, the foreign businessmen and domestic capitalists began to extend their commercial activities to Pudong region. However, due to the obstruct of Huangpu River, the economical development of Pudong region was greatly affected. Thus, the sharp comparison was formed--- a large number of economical activities were gathered in one side while the other one appears to be thousands of acres of farmland.
Nevertheless, since the year 1950 when the open of Pudong was announced by the central government, the construction of new Pudong region step forward rapidly. High buildings and large mansions are being raised just like the growing bamboo shoots after rain. The beautiful rurality are in a harmonious state with the modern buildings. Pudong is stepping into the new century with a fire-new outlook.
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Huangpu river across the north and the south, departs shanghai into two parts. We call Pudong for its being in the east of huangpujiang river. From 20 to 30 eras in this century, with the constructions of economics and commercial districts enclosing the wai’tan, merchant outside and inside spread into pudong district. However, the economic development of pudong suffers largely from the huangpujiang river’cut. The landscapes of pujiang contrasts deeply, one is the farmlands filled with natural crops, the other is the flourish commercial areas.
Since the central denounced to exploit pudong district, it has experienced a lot oflarge changes. Many skyscrapers has spread up, farmlands landscape and the modern buildings reflect each other, and pudong is coming into new century with a new look./
Going through from the south to nouth, Huangpu River divides Shanghai City into two parts. Pudong got its name for the reason of it being located to the south of Huangpu River, In the 1920-30s, with the establishment of the financial center and financial & trade zone centered around Waitan,Foreign traders and national capitalists of our country began to spread their economic activites to Pudong. Howerver Huangpu River is lying through the area, with the traffic disadvantage, Pudong had no chance to to be developed much quickly. At that time, Thousands of supermarkets or sowntowns were spreaded in the west bank of Huangpu River.contrasted against the west bank, the east bank--Pudong just witnessed large-scale crops flourishing in its heart.
Since 1990,the year that Pudong was announced to be opened up by the central government of China, the constructions of Pudong has made lots progress. Like bamboos shoot after a spring rain,high buildings and mansions were set up one after another. With the rurality and modern buildings coexisting harmoniously, Pudong is walking into a new century with a brand-new image.
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The Huangpu River from south to north, divide Shanghai into 2 parts. Pudong is named because it is located at east of the Huangpu River. In 20-30s this century, with the found of finance and business zone, which is base of Waitan, foreign businessman and chinese national capitalist began to expand their economic activity into Pudong. But because of the obstruct of Huangpu River, influence the Pudong's economic development so much. There is a great contrast between the two side of the river, one side there are lots of business called Shi Li Yang Chang, the other side there are lots of farmland.
Since 1990 the government announce to open the Pudong, the construction of Pudong new zone change greatly and fastly. The high buildings and large mansions construct like the bamboo shoots after the spring rein. The rurality and modern buildings get together. Pudong stride into new century with a brand-new face.
Shanghai is divided into two parts by the Huangpu River whose flows across Shanghai from north to south. Pudong got its name because of its location on the east bank of the Huangpu Rriver. In the 20-30's of this century, when the finance and Business trade district with the Bund as its center was established, foreign businessmen and national capitalists extended their economic activities to the Pudong area. However, the economic development of Pudong is greatly affected by river separate. The long stretch of foreign concessions frequented by thousands of merchants on one side of the Huangpu River and the vast patch of natural crops on the other side formed a striking contrast.
Since 1990 when the Central Government announced the opening up and development of
Pudong, the Pudong New Area has seen astonishing progress and rapid changes in construction and has achieved outstanding successes in economic development. High-rises have mushroomed, combining idyllic scenery and modern building, which brings a brand-new Pudong into the new century.
Shanghai is divided into two parts by the Huangpu River whose flows across Shanghai from north to south. Pudong got its name because of its location on the east bank of the Huangpu Rriver. In 1920-30, with the flourish of Waitan as the financial and bussiness centre, bussiness man from home and abroad started to expand their economic activities in Pudong district. But the separation by Huangpu River greatly hampered the economic development in Pudong. The two sides of Huangpu River made a stark contrast: on one side were bustling bussinessmen and thriving marketplaces, while on the other were broad acres of natural crops.
since the central government's announcement to open Pudong in 1990, the Pudong newly-developed area construction changes with each new day, progresses by leaps and bounds. High buildings and large mansions shoot up like mushrooms. Along with the mixing of pastoral scenes and modern architectures, Pudong presents a brand-new appearance into the new century.